"The Falling Leaves" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: hewo Reviewed By: hewo On: October 14, 2004 16:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: you suck . . . mary sue . . . at least make 'em a MINOR CHARACTER and DON'T pair them with ANYBODY . . .Everybody has always like minor characters . . . unless they're sweet like kids Bold
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Title: j Reviewed By: y On: March 24, 2004 12:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: You really suck...Mary sue
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Reviewed By: fangirlofinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 15:44 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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