| "In Silver Rays" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Title: vry nice
Reviewed By: winter051094 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 22:01 CDT
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cute cute vry cute. nice lemon btween these two. keep up the good work.
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Title: Nicki
Reviewed By: FreeThoughtIsGone [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2009 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, nothing like a good lemon at 1:00am to brighten you're outlook. I must say though, you should probably think about a beta reader since you're grammar is a little off at times. You have a fantastic diction that I don't see too often in fanfics, so it was really nice to read something different. The lemon was very descripive and well written, and it made me feel as though I were there. That's how you know it was a good read. :) Keep up the amazing work! Cheers.
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Soooooooooooooooooooooooooo GOOD!!!! :D I'm Happy now!
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Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 16:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Erotic and beautiful in the same time...how do you do that?
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Reviewed By: wow!!! On: March 16, 2005 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG that was soooooooooooo good! wow, just wow.....
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know,the highest enjoyment rating is a 10,but i think this a 12! I totally loved loved loved it! I haven't seen any of your other storys but I'm going to check them out now,if there inuyasha probably read them to,but I hope you keep writing! especially if it's THIS hot! ^_^ loved it!!!!....again! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Evil Karyta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read an Inuyasha lemon this good since... err.. well.. Never.. heh. This is the best I have ever read. You've got awsome tallents in the 'Hentai side of the force' (shrugs). Heh. Seriously, one could grow tired of all those.. um... well.. other fics.. heh. Anyway. Keep going. You should write more of that stuff, heh.
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Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: July 07, 2004 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy fuckin shit that was the best lemon one shot i have ever read! That was really really good! oh i got some pictures of inuyasha in the water with the waterfall coming down on him in my head now!! Those hentai thoughts just wont go away!! hehehe never mind i dont want them to go away **smiles evily** neways i love your story its really good but why does it have to be a one shot?? I WANT MORE MORE MORE MORE SHIMATTA (DAMMIT)!!
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUVED IT'S HENTAI AND IT'S ROMANCE
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Title: ONE PHRASE
Reviewed By: hornyhanyou On: March 28, 2004 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIT THAT WAS ONE OF THE MOST HORNY STORIES I HAVE EVER READ AND I WISH THAT I COULD COME AND FIND OUT WHAT IT REALLY FEELS LIKE. yeah u heard me
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 09:25 CST
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that was wonderful! lemons are what makes the world go round! i have to go sadly but please write more lemons. that was amasing. and i the goddess of hentai (dont kill me my friends call me that) LOVED IT! JA NE
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Title: Lemons...gotta love 'em
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yum, yum, yum, yum, yum, yum, yum, and you know I could just go on and on...*shudders* wonderfully lemony-goodness; reminds me of Ookami-chan's fanfics (which are delightfully tasty, too).
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Reviewed By: Rinoa_H On: March 18, 2004 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the hottest lemon I've ever read!!! Thank You!!!
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Title: LOVE
Reviewed By: Enchanted Nymph/Jaycee On: March 13, 2004 12:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luved ur fic. You should DEFINITELY write another. But u need to work on ur grammar and stuff.
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 04:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so hot i almost felt like I what there. You need to do some more lemoms.
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Reviewed By: Moon Child (too lazy to log in) On: March 03, 2004 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow girl! That was really good... YOU MUST MAKE MORE!!! *puts you on fav list*
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 02:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good . . . I think I need a cigarette, now :D The pace and the flow of the story was excellent. The details were strong, vibrant and sensual. And InuYasha and Kagome were just too cute . . . Just watch for misspellings and typos.
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Reviewed By: Kagura_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 23:08 CST
Comment/Review:
That was sweet...
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Reviewed By: "the little kid" On: March 02, 2004 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my GOD i think i need a cigarette after this...that was so frickin HOT!! i also adore the uniqueness of your writing! it's utterly professional and just so frickin HOT!!!
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Title: Vivi66
Reviewed By: ViVi66 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my my my your Wording is amazing, just VERY few spelling mistakes...i mean VERY few..it was wonderful, and i enjoyed reading such a fully elaborated piece. i think that maybe you should write another...:) dali dali! anyways. yes well i also would love to see you write a Sessy/Rin paring...that would be nice..you dont see too many of those and i love those..but In/Ka are my faves...yes well i love reading your story and i think that you deserve a dollar for it haha lol. i am glad i chose to read it *pats you on back* so long GOOD DAY
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it!!!!!!
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Title: THAT WAS SOOO FREAKIN' AWESOME!!!
Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your style of writing! It is so proffessional sounding. I wish I had more to say, but I just can't seem to express myself I am still in such a state of awe! Anyway, keep up the good work and expect more reviewers in the near future 'cause I'm telling everyone I know to read this fan fic!
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Reviewed By: Little~ Tennyo On: March 02, 2004 15:11 CST
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I beg you to write an Sango/Miroku one-shot *begs on her knee's* pWease!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU'RE STORYYyyy
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Reviewed By: KK Humber On: March 02, 2004 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew!! That was SO HOT!! I hope you will write more IY/Ka lemon later. I for one enjoy reading it immensely. Man, I'll even read a sequel of this! Keep up the great writing.
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