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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was yet another great chapter. You're doing a really good job with this fic. I just one small request. Could you possibly make the chapters a bit longer? Oh, and if you don't mind, I have another request, but it really has nothing to do with your fic. Could you read and review my fic and honestly tell me what you think of it. It's called Fallen Angels, it's an origional fic and it's by me, Koaitan Princess. Well, I guess that was really a given. Anyways, I'll be forever greatfull if you did. Thanks. Ja'ne
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Reviewed By: kita [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, I dont usually like self insertions, but you are doing an excellent job in this fanfiction. I gave you a lower rating in the grammer because there are a few errors. But overall, AWESOME job, can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, yet another great chapter. Good job. Thanks for updating so soon to. Yeah, summer school sucks, but luckily for me, I didn't have to take it this summer. And, what's up with the title of that chapter? It didn't really pertain to the chapter, I mean there really wasn't much bonding. Anyways, update soon. Ja'ne
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job. I noticed a few very minor errors, but nothiing major. You're doing a great job with this fic, keep it up. Just try and update sooner, okay? Ja'ne
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Title: good idea!
Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 17:54 CDT
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I like the idea behiend this! I think at some time all of us DBZ nuts have wondered what it would be like to wake up in that world. I have only one little note and in truth it dosen't effect your story becouse heck it is yours. But DBZ took place in the past, like I think is was 700 AD or there abouts. **wink** triva. Kethry MoonDragon
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, those last two chapters were great, I'm looking forward to the next update, so keep up the good work. Ja'ne Koaitan Princess
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Reviewed By: Reya On: May 19, 2004 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story. Keep going.
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Reviewed By: DARK OBLIVION! On: May 12, 2004 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: PheonixFire On: May 05, 2004 06:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I love it! Keep it up, I want to know what happens next.
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Title: Koaitan Princess
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, not a bad start, I'm usually not really into this exact type, but it's a good start, so keep it up and I'm looking forward to an update, so don't keep me waiting to long. Thanks Ja'ne Koaitan Princess
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Reviewed By: PheonixFire On: April 20, 2004 05:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the idea for your fanfic. Please continue with it - I want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: StubbiCat On: March 05, 2004 02:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
so far so good keep 'em coming want to know more!! :P
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Reviewed By: Kittie Rose On: March 03, 2004 04:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
it's marai not mirir but you are good besides that
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