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Reviewed By: FoS On: June 03, 2005 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice fic. Update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Bennett On: April 23, 2005 04:48 CDT
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Nice to see you updating again! That was a great scene! Did Trunks Survive? I hope so! Update quickly so I can find out! Now here's my Bio: Name:Bennett Age:18 Height:5'8'' Weight:94.5kg Apperance:Blue eyes, strawberry blonde hair. Clothes:Black shoes and pants, dark blue shirt and Light green coat and hat to match. Personality: Bennett is very reliable and trustworthy. He has a great sense of humor but is VERY shy around girls. Misc:Bennett knows martial arts but uses it in self defence only. And his aim is to find the girl of his dreams. Will that do? I hope so! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Bennett On: March 11, 2005 01:42 CST
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Hooray! You updated at last! Well Trunks really did a good job distracing those androids! Let's just hope he can live through the fight with them! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh I love this fic! It made me laugh a lot! Except the sad bits.. I personaly like self insertion fics, I think having a completely new character in the series makes it interesting! And so what if its Mary Sue? I've lost count of the BV fics I've read in which Bulma is beautiful and perfect in every way, so why can't people except it when its an original character? Anyway, update soon, I love Ur story. My No1 Character of all time is VEGETA! I love him so much, he is soooo cool! I'd love to be in the DBZ world and argume with him just so I could laugh at his comebacks! Lol, anyway, in short words, great fic and.. UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Bennett On: January 28, 2005 03:14 CST
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Hooray! Nice to see you updating again! What happend to Trunks? Update quickly so I can find out!
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter. I'm not to fond of the cliff hanger though. It is a bit fun to mess with your readers that way though. My favorite charectors are Trunks (my first anime love) and Vegeta. I've always loved Trunks, Future Trunks mostly, and I just developed a thing for Vegeta, he's not the villen, but he's not the hero, just both at the same time. Anyways, Sari is awsome. Keep up the good work, and I hope to see an update soon. Ja'ne Koaitan Princess
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, these last few chapters have been great. I'm really looking firward to reading more, so please update. Sorry I haven't reviewed, things have been hectic between work and school. Anyways, keep up the good work, and yes Veggie-Chan's head does need to be messed with more. =). Koaitan Princess
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Reviewed By: Bennett On: November 30, 2004 20:49 CST
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Hi! Bennett here! I see you've finally updated your story, GREAT! I was thinking you had given up on it, looks like I was wrong! I look forward to future updates! See ya!
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Reviewed By: kiba's girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!!! Keep up the story, it's starting to get very spicy!!!
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Reviewed By: Kriz Geta [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome, awesome, awesome. i liked this chapter, it was really cool. i like this story man. it's on my favorites list. you should have her explain to Trunks sometime how she got there, and about her not really knowing about herself(cause she isn't really in that demension), and why she was just joking/playing with Cell's mind. anyway, i'll like your story anyway you write it. i'll be waiting for another chappy :D
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Reviewed By: Kriz Geta [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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awsome story! i love it! keep up the good work! i normally don't like o.c. in stories, but urs is cool! :D
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Title: KEWL!!!
Reviewed By: Shadow 666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 16:00 CDT
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This story was hilarious! i loved it! ...i dont c y u dont get more reviews...hmm.. NEway, i hope u update soon. ^_~ k? ~*Shadow 666
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Title: YIIIIII!
Reviewed By: Yoko_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YIIIIII! I am loving this! I've always wanted to play with the Z fighters' heads! YAY! I want to be in the DBZ world too! *flattens ears (yes I have fox ears in authoress mode)* I want to play with Veggie's (Vegeta's) head too! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: trunks1gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*ahem* I must say, good show! jolly good...After finish with these compliments, i must have a spot of tea
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Reviewed By: Bennett On: August 29, 2004 05:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read what you've done in this story so far and I LOVE IT! It's so well written how could I not? You simply HAVE to update! I must know what happens next! You hear me? UPDATE!
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