| "Till There Was You" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kagome Girl On: May 11, 2004 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT BUT MAKE SURE KIKIO GETS CAUGHT WITH SOMEONE AND IS KICKED OUT OF THE PICTURE. PLUS KAGOME AND INUYASHA ARE SUTCH A CUTE COUPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 15:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(offline) On: April 28, 2004 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update dude!!! I LOVE YOUR FIC... *ahem* anways you already knew that but juss wanted to tell you again. ^_^ anways.. is Kik and Inu going out or something... and is inu going to get with kag? i hope so...(for the second one) anways ill review as soon as you post the second chappie!!
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Reviewed By: destinysfate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 19:28 CDT
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when she thought "how bad could this be" i was practically SCREAMING "No! Don't say that! it's going to be terrible, now! you jinxed it! why'd you have to go and say that?!?!?!?!" Now, as convinced as i am that smthng bad is gonna happen, please please PLEASE let me be wrong!!!! NEWayz, you're doing a great job, keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more. And you're doing much better with keeping it in the same tense all the way through.
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Title: me likey
Reviewed By: magickal gwin of rain On: April 22, 2004 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very good and i hope to see more of it.
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Reviewed By: kouga_girl1 On: April 21, 2004 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!!!ah another good author ^_^ hehehe i love your fanfic,your style, everything!plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 10:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Still luvin it! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: INU ROX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I'm so happy 2 be review number 20...REMEMBER ME!! I'll be talking to ya in the future! It'll be great! HAve a nice time with your story...it's great! KEEP WRITING!-INU ROX
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Title: really cute
Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: April 11, 2004 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a good story, you should keep going with it, i am really excited to see what happens next!~
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you finally updated. good chapter. im surprise kagome accepted the role so quickly. i mean its a big role and kag doesn't seem like the type that would jump into a big decision like that. i really like how the story is coming along. hope you will update soon!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Aewi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading Inu Fics about Inu as a father looking for a mommy for his kid for a while. But your fic is original and I love it so much. Please update ^v^
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Title: i don't mean to rush u...
Reviewed By: jackie s. On: April 11, 2004 04:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't mean to rush u along, but i looooove your fanfic so far and was wonder ing if you could possibly speed it up, because i have to go on a coir trip to halifax soo and won't have internet access for a week!!! GASP
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Title: ur story
Reviewed By: Inuyashas_girl_18 On: April 10, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG WHAT IS KAGOME THINKING UPDATE SOON PLZZZZZZZZZZZ omg im so adding you o my favourite authors list!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: destinysfate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 18:04 CST
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Woot woot!!! Finally they meet!! This is the moment I live for in every fanfiction (and book, movie, etc.) I liked the way it all happened. You did a very good job with not making it too cheesy. The only thing I would suggest is that you try to make sure all the verbs are in the present tense. Stories that are written that way are more interesting to read (inmyopinion) then the usual past-tense ones, but they are a pain in the arse to write-- every now and then, you forget and use a past tense verb. "Didn't" instead of "doesn't"- you know what I mean. It can be fixed by simply reading through the chapter (slowly) before posting. Other than that, I compliment you on your writing skills. ~*~destinysfate~*~ PS-- it sounds like a good movie (the one you based the story on). I think I'm gonna try and find it at Blockbusters or something (they should really pay you for advertising!)
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Reviewed By: crescentmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
auh-oh, what's next? keep going.
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