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Title: ur story
Reviewed By: Inuyashas_girl_18 On: April 10, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG WHAT IS KAGOME THINKING UPDATE SOON PLZZZZZZZZZZZ omg im so adding you o my favourite authors list!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: destinysfate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 18:04 CST
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Woot woot!!! Finally they meet!! This is the moment I live for in every fanfiction (and book, movie, etc.) I liked the way it all happened. You did a very good job with not making it too cheesy. The only thing I would suggest is that you try to make sure all the verbs are in the present tense. Stories that are written that way are more interesting to read (inmyopinion) then the usual past-tense ones, but they are a pain in the arse to write-- every now and then, you forget and use a past tense verb. "Didn't" instead of "doesn't"- you know what I mean. It can be fixed by simply reading through the chapter (slowly) before posting. Other than that, I compliment you on your writing skills. ~*~destinysfate~*~ PS-- it sounds like a good movie (the one you based the story on). I think I'm gonna try and find it at Blockbusters or something (they should really pay you for advertising!)
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Reviewed By: crescentmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
auh-oh, what's next? keep going.
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 19:11 CST
Comment/Review:
AAHHH UPDATE!!vPLEASE I LOVE YOUR STORY!
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww...that is somewhat cute and sad how she thinks kagome is her mother. i wouldn't want to live my life like that...living in a lie. that is some embrassing job kagome has to do. but i guess when u need money you will take any kind of job that doesn't go against your morals. update soon!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was hecka laughing when the commerical came on. that is funny. =]
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 18:17 CST
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Ummm, isn't 24000 yen like 240$?
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 18:02 CST
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Bah!! You post a "new" chapter when you took one down?? You must have hit a wrong button. *Sigh* you got my hopes up....
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Reviewed By: galene On: March 23, 2004 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmm very amusing... kagome as a tree *laughs*
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 20:20 CST
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I don't know how long it took you between posts last time, but I hope that you post soon this time! I love your fic it's so cute. But, could you tell me where you found the movie it's based on. You said it was a foreign flick, but from what country, and who was in it?
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Reviewed By: Whitney Lin13 On: March 19, 2004 22:37 CST
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Please continue soon! This story is cool!
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Reviewed By: Orlando_Lover On: March 19, 2004 22:36 CST
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oo, pls continue soon! I cant wait till Inu and Kag meet up.
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Reviewed By: Lil ANGEWL On: March 06, 2004 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice. please update i really like this. and no, your writing isnt crappy.
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Reviewed By: galene On: March 06, 2004 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this is interesting!! more soon please
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Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz review soon I do like it I can't wait to see what happen next.^_~ Bye!!
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