| "What Will She Say?" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: sha kenren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 13:13 CDT
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im really enjoying the story, i hope you are writing more to it
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 01:45 CDT
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Okay so until I'm done reading I'll just leave reviews through the whole thing! I'm on chapter five now and I understand if you didn't know Kagome's friend's names but the made up names could have at least been Japanese. It just doesn't sound right to be reading about Miroku, Sango, Shippou, Inuyasha, and Kagome then have names like Kelly pop up. But hey your fic.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 01:23 CDT
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Not done reading all the way yet,but you should know that you spelled Sesshoumaru and Kaede wrong. I noticed that none of the other reviewers pointed that out so I thought I'd help.
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Reviewed By: Coca [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, cute fic! For an idea, you could have Kouga and Inu Yasha fight, and then Kagome and Inu Yasha could get married, and then you could do their big entire wedding. ^_^ Sorry I don't have many ideas, I'm kind of tired. hehe Have fun writing!
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Reviewed By: InuFan545 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhhhhhhhh very good very good indeed plzzz update
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Reviewed By: InuFan545 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story update plzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: miroku_lover1002 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this story 'cuz it's like, everthing good happened!! I love that Sango and Miroku hooked up and Sesshomaru and Rin hooked up as well. Please finish the story!! I really like it!
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Reviewed By: cheychey3 On: March 05, 2004 08:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was wonderfull!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: TankylovesSesshou On: March 04, 2004 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arigato Gozaimasu! Love to read the 'what if' type of fics. This is shaping up really well for a new author. One request; if the group gets the last shard PLEEZE don't damage Sesshoumaru TOO much. Yep; I'm a Sessou fan, could you tell? ;) Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: meq On: March 03, 2004 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KAWAII DESU YO! ^______^ o, oriqinality, qeez, deres so many inu fanfiction dats about da same. so no hard feelinqs on dat, k chrissy? :P
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