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| "In The End- Anfang" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Tadelnswert On: May 01, 2005 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way this story is coming along, it's unique, I'm sure, or a rare idea. I've yet to see any other stories with Ran and Aya in swapped places. The waiting for an update isn't so bad, and the only thing preventing me from screaming out 'more, more, more' is the fact that this story seems fragile and shouldn't be rushed. And, of course, your little one. ;) I'm not a big fan of Aya-chan, as I've fallen into the habit of hating most girls that appear in Weiss (save the secretaries). It's stereotypical, but justified by the number of yaoi-based stories there are. The only thing I could as for without feeling too guilty about is more Ran. Keep up the good work, I'm eager for more!
| Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i understand u got a lot to do and i really like the stroy so i wont push but plzzzzzzzzzzzzz more i dont wanna have to cry on u ..... much any way. more plzz i love it. not fav but still love it
| Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story not my fav but still..... not bad for what u have so far. plzz write more.
| Reviewed By: Laguna chan On: March 09, 2004 21:05 CST
Comment/Review:
interesting AU, take your time then, but promise me one thing, you will finish this fic, will ya. i'll wait your next fic, jya ne ^-*
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