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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 17:30 CST
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PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZ update............I beg you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's really good update update update......plz
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 05:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mkays. I read up to the 9th chapter. Can't wait for you to update. Naraku really sickens me in this story, more than the rest that I've read. Honestly now, he's worst than Michael Jackson. I changed a few ratings here and there, boosted your originality, but lowered your spelling and grammar. A few punctuations are missing and I find some parts hard to read. Some may not know any Scottish dialect at all and may not understand the speech. I suggest putting the definitions of a few words at the end or beginning of your chapters to help us better understand. That's about it really... very nice plot, as I continued reading, I realized how original it actually was ;D Good job, creativity is hard to find now-a-days...
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 04:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm only on chapter two but I couldn't wait to review. At the beginning, it sorta reminded me of 'The Sound of Music' yah know... the movie. Nice plot, and the part about it taking place in Scotland is original. I like how you put that Scottish accent into their speech too ;D Hopefully I'll continue liking this story as I read further.
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Reviewed By: KowaiiMusume [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 09:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things are getting better between Sango and Miroku that is so awesome. Poor Inu just can't seem to get his foot out of his mouth long enough to explain things. *Shakes his head* I really despise Hojo and Kagome's father but typical males of the time. I can feel for Sesshomaru and the confussion he is suffering through. It will be interesting how he finds out about his son. What a shock that will be. Anyway I love this story. Been tracking it since before you started to re-write the chapters and re-post. Update soon it is a great story.
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Title: hi again
Reviewed By: Luna chick, (nsi) On: December 10, 2004 08:35 CST
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It's been a while, but I'm glad your back. Loved the updates...just don't wait too long for Inu Yasha's explanation
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't even begin to tell you how much I adore this story! It's setting, as well as the story itself, sits close to my heart. You've come up with an original piece with lots of twists and its just astounding. I do feel sorry for Kagome and Inuyasha (as well as Sango and Miroku to a certain extent) they keep getting thrown into sticky situation. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Until Next Time... Scottishfae
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Reviewed By: Ardinae On: July 21, 2004 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter. I like the revision. It makes the story clearer. Hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 08:26 CDT
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i can not wait for the next update!! it will probabley b just as good as the last!! i love this story so much!! much love never forget the love!! plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 03:46 CDT
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oooooo I so can't wait to find out what happens next! Please keep up the great work and update asap. I love this story and it's a giggle fest. I hope sesshy remembers soon. poor poor rin. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 10:51 CDT
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i can not wait to c what happens!! i hope u update soon!! and much love never forget the love!!! plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 23:31 CDT
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Gah! Please keep up the good work and update asap. I can't wait to see what happens next. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story. I really like the whole scottish thing going on here. This story is really getting interesting and I hope to read more of it soon. Hopefully Kagome and Inuyasha will be getting together soon as well? hehehe. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 04:45 CDT
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ooo Please keep up the good work! You made it alot darker...Never thought that Naraku would be a child molester...specially boys, but hey at this point I could believe anything. I can't wait to find out what happens next so please keep up the good work. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOO! DUN DUNDUN DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN! the calvary's here!! lol well that was a great chapter! Please keep up the good work and update asap. Krystal. : )
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Reviewed By: angel's feather On: July 14, 2004 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the previous version a while ago, so I can't really remember it, but I think you have improved on it. I like the story, although I want to know what happens in your other story "Unexpected Developments" even more. I am unfamiliar with the Scottish dialect, but I personally find the use of "wot" to sound/look uncouth (i don't really like that word, but it just popped into my head), I would prefer they say "what" instead. Anyway, sayonara!
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