| "Scottish Deceit" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 23:15 CDT
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well that was a depressing chapter w/ sango, but I've already read this so i know what happens for the most part...I loved it and I can't wait till you finish editing and get going with the goods. lol so update asap. and keep up the good work. I love your story. Krystal
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 07, 2004 22:33 CDT
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nice chapter.
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Reviewed By: 66666 On: July 07, 2004 11:44 CDT
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will kouga try to steal kagome
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 07, 2004 09:37 CDT
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good update. =)
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 05:25 CDT
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hey great work keep up the great work and update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: baka onna On: July 01, 2004 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great Story! I don't think there's anythign else out there quite like it! I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol well I reread the chapters and I've loved it so far! Te he, I couldn't believe how much I had forgotten. lol it's like my wake up call. Well keep up the great work and update asap. I'm looking forward to more of this story. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: skne On: June 30, 2004 21:41 CDT
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Enjoyed it to begin with, but with the revisions, it's become quite good. A few grammatical mistakes, but nothing serious. Continue with the good work.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 16:02 CDT
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okay! Just don't forget about us! lol Krystal.
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Title: valene
Reviewed By: valene [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 08:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey your an awsome author update soon...im loven it*_*
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: June 03, 2004 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly enjoy reading this story! I love the setting and the intrigue. Please continue. It has the feel and style of a romance historical novel. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 14:48 CDT
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update soon!! i really want to no what happens between inu and kag!!!! much love!~!!!!~!~!~!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 20:15 CDT
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I like the idea you have for this story. You even put in little twist that I certainly aprove of. But I feel you are cheating yourself. You seem as if you are writing the main ideas or outline instead of taking the time to put in details. I really do like this story but it would be better if you added some descriptions to make it complete. I look forward to seeing how Sango will act when confronted by Hojo. And I see a promised catfight or at least a tongue lashing between Kagome and Kikyo. And how will InuYasha act toward his wife now that he knows she is pregnant? I'm sure that "son" must be mistaken. I was a bit confused about the Rin/Naraku part but I think I caught enough not to be lost. I think it was very original of you to not only do this in a scottish style but to use the dileact also. I would comment on how short the chapters are but I see you have already addressed that. But I am confident that if you put more details in the chpaters that they will be longer.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 10:51 CDT
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ack! well that must really really suck for Inuyasha...that's not even his kid...how sad... I hope that Kagome forgives him and that Rin gets away from Naraku, because that just makes me wanna gag, Rin needs her Sesshomaru.. lol well i hope that you keep up the good work and update soon. i can't wait to find out what happens next with sango and Miroku..te he. Krystal.
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Title: YEAH!
Reviewed By: lunachick (not signed in) On: June 01, 2004 22:52 CDT
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3 CH in 1 day after a long time without update makes up for the wait. Love where this is going.
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