"Love Between Pharoh and Servant" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: QueenFool [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 21:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Dude your talented oh and im curios 'bout dat "puppy+set" end. reasons for the ratings Originality/Creativity- well normaly yami is da pharoh and yugi is da servant so dats new, Spelling & Grammar- I'm so sorry but it true lots of misspeling in da first chap than that secod chap was great I did'nt catch anythig wrong. thats all thore true reason 'sides it was a great fic all 'round, so in short "great fic!"
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Reviewed By: kristen89(not logged in) On: March 06, 2004 11:29 CST Comment/Review: It's a really good story. I think you would be good at writing a story and not just one shots. keep up the good work. i look forward to seeing more fanfics in the future.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 15:01 CST Comment/Review: Hey! Ryou is mine! He is my love! Not yours!
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