| "Curse passed on once more" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: June 18, 2004 10:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor girl. I feel so bad! Hmmmm...seems IY's kid already knew about the engagement. I hope things start getting better. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, not AGAIN! This curse thing is getting really annoying. Hmmmm....maybe those two kids are gonna fall in love? But how is it that InuYasha and Kagome's kid is a hanyou if they are both human? I don't get that. Anywayz, great story, update soon!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Ldypebsaby [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good starting for the story..I'm a fan of InuYasha so yeah...it's all good. Just a few grammar things here and there.....can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: inukimo_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 13:54 CST
Comment/Review:
this story is veary nice who am i tring to kid this is cool sorry bout that keep up the good work
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