| "In the Arms of Another" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Lili 68 On: April 16, 2004 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... that was good I liked it alot!! I never really thought about it before until now how Kouga felt. I guess he would feel the same as Kagome. Any way... I liked your story alot and I do like the paring even though I like Inuyasha parings alot to. I can't wait to find out what happends next so update soon k. I think your writing is really good and you should keep doing it! :D :P
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Reviewed By: hanyougirl On: March 12, 2004 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
[sorry i goofed on that last reveiw.^-^] i like the pairing kag/kouga,but you spelled his name wrong.it's Kouga,with a 'u'.but other than that it's pretty good. i hate inu/kikyo pairings, but you got away with it,this time. MUWAHAHA! well there be another chapter? UPDATED PLZ! ^-^
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Reviewed By: hayougirl On: March 12, 2004 13:03 CST
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Reviewed By: AMANDA_TRINH On: March 11, 2004 15:15 CST
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THAT WAS A GOOD STORY BUT YOU SHOULD'VE MADE IT A INU/KAG FICY!!I TOTALLY DISAGREE ABOUT YOUR PAIRING!!BUT HEY WHAT CAN I DO IT IS YOUR FICY!!2 ALL OF U KIKYO LOVERS U MAY NOT WANT 2 READ THE NEXT PART SO DON'T READ THIS!!!"KIKYO IS A HOE CUZ A BI~ATCH(I LOVE THAT WORD)DOESN'T SUIT HER!!SHE IS A DEAD SLUT MAN!!HOW COULD INUYASHA LOVE HER I MEAN HE MUST BE DENSE OR SOMETHING CUZ THE REAL THING IS THERE(KAGOME)BUT THAT PUPPY HAVE 2 GO 2 THE HOOCHE!!KIKYO IS A FUCKING DIPSHIT ANYONE WHO IS A FAN OF KIKYO SHOULD BE SORRY 4 THEIR DAMN SELVES!!!U SHOULD REALLY TRY 2 MAKE SOME INU/KAG FICYS!!I WOULD RATHER GO 2 HELL BE4 BEING A FAN OF KIKYO!!KIKYO HAS LITTLE FANS ANYONE!!!"THAT WAS A GOOD STORY MY ASS"!!FEH!!
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Reviewed By: AMANDA_TRINH On: March 11, 2004 15:14 CST
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THAT WAS A GOOD STORY BUT YOU SHOULD'VE MADE IT A INU/KAG FICY!!I TOTALLY DISAGREE ABOUT YOUR PAIRING!!BUT HEY WHAT CAN I DO IT IS YOUR FICY!!2 ALL OF U KIKYO LOVERS U MAY NOT WANT 2 READ THE NEXT PART SO DON'T READ THIS!!!"KIKYO IS A HOE CUZ A BI~ATCH(I LOVE THAT WORD)DOESN'T SUIT HER!!SHE IS A DEAD SLUT MAN!!HOW COULD INUYASHA LOVE HER I MEAN HE MUST BE DENSE OR SOMETHING CUZ THE REAL THING IS THERE(KAGOME)BUT THAT PUPPY HAVE 2 GO 2 THE HOOCHE!!KIKYO IS A FUCKING DIPSHIT ANYONE WHO IS A FAN OF KIKYO SHOULD BE SORRY 4 THEIR DAMN SELVES!!!U SHOULD REALLY TRY 2 MAKE SOME INU/KAG FICYS!!I WOULD RATHER GO 2 HELL BE4 BEING A FAN OF KIKYO!!KIKYO HAS LITTLE FANS ANYONE!!!
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: March 05, 2004 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a good story, but some pointers when you write. Seperate each paragraph a little better. I had a hard time reading the story with the way it is right now. And try going into more detail about what the characters are feeling. Don't take my review as a flame or to heart. But I do hope you takes these pointers though. And I do enjoy KougaxKagome pairing.
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