Reviewed By: trapt_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 17:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm really suprised that this hasn't gotten any reviews so far! I know that this is mm.org, and a small fandom as well, but still, this is definitely one of the higher up Initial D fictions I've read (between here and ff.net, so don't worry, there's more than just 15). The way you captured all the sounds at the beginning was extremely well written, and even as I was reading I was wide eyed. I understand why you used all teh distinctive sounds now that I've reached the end, but, and it's a wonderful tie. Still, being able to note each purr and moan the car made is awefully impressive. Aside from that, it's just a shame that this looks to be discontinued. (Looking at the gap in time from the publish date.) it presents a good idea, what with a blind driver doing something akin to the Impact Blue idea. It's really intriguing, and what's better yet is that it's well written, with little grammar, spelling, or other English related mistakes, and a good show of vocabulary. vocabulary. Well, update if you will, or let it sit; either way, it's very well done.
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