| "Afternoon fun" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: FoS On: June 21, 2004 07:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it :) Great fic for a first time ;) Actually, I don't think it's REALLY a PWP, since there is a plot going... About time I see a good Gh/Vi ;)
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Reviewed By: wussley007 On: April 29, 2004 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gohan is a stud! (Bet he took lessons from Vegeta) Good fanfic, nice boinging scene! How about some...umm....fanfic pictures? Eh? Eh? I know eventually you will! Don't deny your destiny!
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Reviewed By: angel02_as_if On: April 08, 2004 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't read the story but i know the author and she should get a 10 all the way across the board just because I SAID SO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: The Crittic On: March 10, 2004 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Magnificent! Truely a work of Art! A Must Read!
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Reviewed By: Misery Child [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was pretty good. I really enjoyed the bit at the end. The lemon seemed a little rushed, but it was OK. I wouldn't mind seeing more.
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