| "Mokuba's Slumber Party" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: peachgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 17:06 CDT
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air! Air! I need air! *gasps* OMG that was so funny can I be in it and paired with Bakura? I really like this fanfiction!
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Reviewed By: Wing white angel On: October 16, 2004 16:17 CDT
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please can i be in it and i want to be paired with Yami
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Title: Fun story
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 00:16 CDT
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Mind if I join you guys? I want to be paired with Yami.
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Title: BOB IS KOOL!
Reviewed By: Ryou's Kitty On: May 07, 2004 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi.Mind if I join the party?I am atrracted to shiny things!!Which means I go after the sennon puzzle and sennon ring.And any other shiny object.UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: -Lil Sorceress- On: May 01, 2004 09:47 CDT
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LOL!!! UPDATE!!! PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 16:03 CDT
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mwahahahaha! I love it! Ryou should get a lollipop for being so cool! ^__^
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Title: Poor Otogi!
Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 13:06 CDT
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*sniff* How dare you do that to my Otogi! He might mot be evil, but he's one of my 4 awesome bishies! Well, he's tied for second with two others. Ryou beats all of them! ^_^ But Ryou only said one line in this! T_T Ok, to the real point, it's really getting good! I want to know what torture will come of this! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: Pokemongirl On: April 12, 2004 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanx for the new chappie! I can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: foxfire9 (who isn't logged in) On: April 11, 2004 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmm! Cholate! Thanks, anyway update sooooooooooooon! ^______________________________^
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 16:48 CDT
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Ooh, yet another cliffie! I need to know what's going to happen!!! Please? Pwetty pwease? Uodate or my yami will get angry, and that's not good on my part or yours...
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Title: I LOVE THIS!
Reviewed By: Pokemongirl On: April 07, 2004 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you a 7 for style of writing because most of it's written in Dialouge. I'd like to see more description of where they are and all that. But don't get me wrong, this is a GREAT fic. That's why I gave you a 10 in all the other rating boxes.
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 11:39 CDT
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I love it! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: foxfire9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 07:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER?!?!?!?!?!?! YOU ARE EVIL! UPDATE NOW!
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Reviewed By: PepperFang [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job, I like it. :)
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Reviewed By: KaoriLindsayBlack [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this fan fic rocks please write more you are doing a good thing by writeing this... well at least you keep me from lighting the kaiba mansion on fire for starters and much more
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