Title: Not Bad!! Reviewed By: Rurouni KJS On: March 06, 2004 18:12 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Impressive! I was not very keen on the middle part, where Cassy goes into total emotion-dump mode on Sophitia. Felt too melodramatic AND exposition-heavy. But the Charade battle and death scene were excellent. This works wonderfully as a vignette that works so well with the source material that it could be seamlessly inserted into the game storyline. And for me, that is the absolute pinnacle of fanfiction.
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