| "Depending on a Stranger" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: jillz On: August 02, 2004 21:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
is it finished?? huh? huh??? !!! yeah!! evana is dead!!!and tht line where rei says 'i consider u as a street kid who got damned good at making money' was sooo kewl!!!
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Reviewed By: aeristurner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay u updated!...is that the last chapter or is there more? *is hoping that there's more...and if there isn't that u'll write a sequel*
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Reviewed By: Neptune_Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! An update! I began reading this fic months ago, and I hadn't seen an update for a long time, and then I check my mailbox...poof! Yippee! Keep on writing, and try to update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: Elvishfaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awseome fic!!! You should update it real soon, leaving huge cliffhangers like that is mean, and then taking so long to update is meaner. But tother than that I Love this fic.
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Reviewed By: keisan17 On: July 15, 2004 20:14 CDT
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Poor Rei!! Poor Kai! I don't like Evana...you're really good at making bad guys or girls in this case. You've got the betrayal and deception bit down pat lol, it's good when an author creates an antagonist that the audience just hates, because that's the point, isn't it? Lol, don't mind me rambling on about logical things. Anywho, I hope Tyson and Max get back and I wonder if Dranzer will be any use to Kai so he can save Rei. He is gonna save Rei, isn't he? He must. Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: jillz On: July 13, 2004 05:55 CDT
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holy crap, that was sooo gud!!! aw...i wish rei would do his martial arts thing....*sigh* an ya noe wat? i m so GONNA KILL EVANA!!THT WOMAN IS GONNA GO DOWN AND I MEAN IT!!! *cough cough* *turns to person standing nearby* glass of water pls...
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Reviewed By: aeristurner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 23:00 CDT
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yay u finally updated! :> . poor Kai and Ray...u better not let Ray die!...anyways keep up the good job and update soon!
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Title: continue
Reviewed By: dark_sanity_kuro On: June 16, 2004 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hhhhiiiiiiiiillllllo very very big fan gonna die if you dont continue. so please save my life and continue the story.
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Title: cotinue
Reviewed By: dark sanity On: June 15, 2004 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey big fan here please continue
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Reviewed By: demonspet On: June 14, 2004 12:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon i'm dying!
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Title: coninue
Reviewed By: dark_sanity_kai On: June 07, 2004 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuved it but pretty please continue
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Pheonix On: May 02, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey , this is a really good fic Update soon !
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Reviewed By: jillz On: April 24, 2004 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!! HIGH MARKS!! NOW JUST CONTINUE IT!! i like tht bit about the scars...*wink wink* it was an interesting opening to the , ahem SCENE...
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Reviewed By: aeristurner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love your story...i can't believe that you left it there!...UPDATE! Soon!!.....
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Reviewed By: Reis love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 09:57 CST
Comment/Review:
like ur storie.^_^ please continue...PLEASE! thanks.^-^
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