| "Insatiable Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: June 12, 2004 12:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just started reading this fic. It seems to be shaping up into a really good one. Keep up the great writing. I'm looking forward to readingthe next chapter which you will be posting soon,I hope. Dee & Ryo seem to be in character with the manga. I just love those guys!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sonic16 On: June 08, 2004 05:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Taht's not the end is it?? It can't be there has to be more PLEASE!! I LOVE this fic so much!! Keep up the exilent job!!
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Reviewed By: Sili [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh! An author who does SxS and DxR! You rock. Please continue! *begs*
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Title: HI
Reviewed By: Arucard [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww, why'd they stop? I hate interruptions:( It was going so good. You shoud let them go on that vacation and finaly have no interruptions. Or a few then at last let them go all the way. I can't wait! PLEASE hurry i can't wait!
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Title: Nice!!
Reviewed By: Wildefyre [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 12:55 CST
Comment/Review:
So far so good! I'll be interested in seeing where this goes. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 18:42 CST
Comment/Review:
I very much enjoyed what you have so far. It's much like the manga in how it likes to tease the hell out of the reader. But, we all like a little teasing every now and again, ne? ^_~ The only problems I could find were some spelling and grammar errors, but those can easily be fixed by proof reading or getting someone to beta it. You said you had a few other chapters finished, yes? I cannot wait to see them.
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