Reviewed By: Zak Myo On: April 22, 2004 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My guess is that this is way before they find out that Melfina is the key to opening the thing(forgot what it's called).But then again,this brings up the question of why they acted they way they did when they were part of the Outlaw Star and they both told eachother that they love eachother and want to be with them for the rest of their lives.Note that your story wasn't what brought up the question.It was what I wrote.Now as for the story,made me remember the ending theame cause when I was halfway through,it popped into my brain as if I was watching an episode. ARRRGGGG!!!! Now I'm goin to be singing it all day and then some.Maybe all month.But please tell me that you're gonna make another Outlaw Star fanfic.I loved this one and people get beter over time.If that's true,then maybe I'll actually finish my fanfic. Sorry about this long comment.
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