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Reviewed By: Gin_Hayashi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 06:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it when someone takes Sailor Moon and turns it from the froofy 'magical girl' stereotype and makes it into something actually believable. And you almost never see an inserted created character fit very well into the series setup, but I can almost forget Ryoku isnt really from the series. The dynamics of this story leave me wanting to know what happens though poor Usagi hasnt really made any progress since quite a few chapters ago. I really hope to see how this story turn out. Keep up the fabulous job. I so rarely find Sailor Moon fanfiction that captures me the way yours has. Good luck on your writing! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 12:12 EDT
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Nice to see you're still alive and kicking. Though I have to ask, where do you get the idea for Junko from?
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Reviewed By: darkprincessselene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fanfic. Your writing style and attention to detail is great. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Comartemis [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 13:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Easily one of the best fics I've ever read, and I've read a lot. It's good to know this fic isn't dead; you had me worried for a while there. *Glares and grows a battle aura* Now hurry up and finish the next chapter. It's cruel to leave us (and more importantly Makoto) hanging like this.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 16:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huh, I always liked SM stories that have a harder edge to them. This story reminds me of some of DDFA's work with Usagi Is Dead fic or his assassins story though much more detailed. The letters in the very beginning were a very creative touch. I also liked the strange love... quadrangle you have going on with Makoto's brother. Is a harem of Sailor Senshi a good thing? Hmmmm, may be not. Overall, I'm glad you revised this thing or else I would have never noticed it. Hey, if you need help let me know, I'd love to be of assistance.
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 02:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story. I am so looking forward to what comes next.
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Reviewed By: Az On: August 08, 2005 15:24 EDT
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meh,meh,meh....it stoped... NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!. ill stop wailing like serena if you update soon? please???
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Title: REVIEW
Reviewed By: LiLHeartz On: July 28, 2005 05:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love ur fan fic.it's not easy for me to actually like stories written based on another author,but urs captured my attention.please continue with the story.i can't wait till all the sailor senshi arise! (=^.^=)
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, an update! i love this story, it's by far the best a.u. i've ever read. when you say new senshi do you mean an oc or a senshi from the show to be brought in? well, i guess i'll find out in the next update. keep up the awesome work ^_~.
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 04:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool Story. It's Not often that I give a story a 10 in any category. Keep up the good work. I especially like the split personality and am looking forward to when Serenity and Usagi start talking to each other. Also how long until Serenity notices Pluto? That should be an interesting meeting. Anyways, thanks for the good read.
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Reviewed By: Sokudo Ningyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 03:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Ding dong, the witch is dead...which old witch? The wicked witch!" I mean, uh....pity.
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Title: Again!
Reviewed By: Sokudo Ningyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 05:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
And we meet again. So I'll review again (what does this make? Three sites?) and say this is still one of the most original SM fics I've read in years.
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Reviewed By: vader4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 06:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story and read it all night long. love it. its super its great. i cant wait the love connections to connected. i dont want to spoil this for anyone, but this is a must READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Rimute [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 04:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story please keep a good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sailor Z. On: April 06, 2004 18:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like it. please continue!! I also enjoyed your fic seeing stars!!
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