| "The Brooch" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Arri On: April 26, 2013 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I am loving this fanfiction. I like how everything you have happen has a reason for happening. I love the realisticness of it, as well as the tactics and strategy. The fights are realistic and I love the military aspect given to the story, which I can easily say if very realistic. Thank you for writing! I look forward to the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Silviata [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2011 10:57 EST
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Don't worry about not updating all the time. This story is so good that it's worth the wait. :) I have to say that I really appreciate the long chapter sizes and the huge depth you've given to everything. There are so many characters, so much information, and so many details that it would probably take me years to finish a chapter, if I were writing it. :D Thank you for taking time to share this story with everyone here! |
Reviewed By: puppylover6511 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2010 23:22 EDT
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Yeah Ami! So excited to see a new chapter from you. Awesome as always!
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Reviewed By: Silviata [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2010 20:50 EDT
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So glad to see this updated, and to finally get more of Ami's backstory. Pretty powerful stuff, really :D. Fantastic! Love your work!
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Reviewed By: Kieron [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2009 16:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job so far!!! Keep it up.... I like the length of your chapters, part of why I started reading it, and I found the story very exciting...although I have to wonder if Usagi and Serenity are ever going to merge...and what impact being 'hollow' will have on Neptune when she fights. I look forward to reading this...although I'm missing Ami-chan the tactician...
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Reviewed By: Silviata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2009 18:48 EDT
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Thanks for the update--it's good to see this fic hasn't been abandoned. :D Take care, you're a fantastic writer and I'm glad you're not letting it go to waste.
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Reviewed By: Silviata [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 17:27 EDT
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Another update!!! :D Thank you! Every chapter, I wonder if this is going to be the one where Michiru and Haruka join the rest of the senshi... and then you leave me hanging, again! :P Great work, your story is truly amazing. Please update soon? :)
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Reviewed By: puppylover6511 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 13:31 EDT
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I've decided that this is my favorite Sailor Moon fanfiction ever. I don't know if you are still writing this, but please continue. Please!
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Reviewed By: Silviata [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 22:33 EST
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I really enjoy your characters and dialogue. It's a good thing that I can read this story and picture it all happening in my mind, and that the descriptions are so believable. I'm *really* glad you updated again, I was starting to despair that there would never be an ending. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 13:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it the plot is very good update soon.
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Title: About your story
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 15:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey whats up I want to tell you about your story I like like your story its very good the only problem I see in your story is that there is a lot of dialogue and less action in your story as I read a chapter I keep reading dialogue after dialogue that I get bored and eventuallyt I lost interest in reading the chapter now dont get me wrong Im not flaming you its just that you have put more action in it anyway I hope you listen to me and update your story soon farewell.
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Reviewed By: Gin_Hayashi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 06:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it when someone takes Sailor Moon and turns it from the froofy 'magical girl' stereotype and makes it into something actually believable. And you almost never see an inserted created character fit very well into the series setup, but I can almost forget Ryoku isnt really from the series. The dynamics of this story leave me wanting to know what happens though poor Usagi hasnt really made any progress since quite a few chapters ago. I really hope to see how this story turn out. Keep up the fabulous job. I so rarely find Sailor Moon fanfiction that captures me the way yours has. Good luck on your writing! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 12:12 EDT
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Nice to see you're still alive and kicking. Though I have to ask, where do you get the idea for Junko from?
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Reviewed By: darkprincessselene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fanfic. Your writing style and attention to detail is great. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Comartemis [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 13:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Easily one of the best fics I've ever read, and I've read a lot. It's good to know this fic isn't dead; you had me worried for a while there. *Glares and grows a battle aura* Now hurry up and finish the next chapter. It's cruel to leave us (and more importantly Makoto) hanging like this.
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