| "One night with amy" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: boobcatcher On: August 20, 2005 02:56 CDT
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nice, chris/amy make good lemons
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Reviewed By: N On: July 14, 2005 18:00 CDT
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I would've liked it better if Sonic hadn't gotten in the way. and you not have used capitol letters so much...
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Reviewed By: gems On: January 18, 2005 15:17 CST
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chris and amy?!?! lol
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Reviewed By: N On: November 23, 2004 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wasn't that impressed. I kinda hoped chris would be the one to get Amy pregnant, I was hoping for something REALLY differnet here.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: sammyringo2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fanfic!
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Title: Hm...
Reviewed By: sugandya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic has a lot of potential, but please can you run it through a spell and grammer checker? :( .. Maybe grammer/spell checking it will ruin the effect. It's pretty funny.
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Title: Not bad for being a PWP
Reviewed By: braynstorm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 00:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, but work on how you write the story. The choice of words you use can make or break the entire mood of the story. Not trying to flame...just trying to give some constructive criticism. You could improve your story by like 300% just by looking over your work.
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Title: THANKS!
Reviewed By: Darkstalker X [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 16:06 CST
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I JUST WANNA SAY, THAT THANKS, I APRECIATE THAT YOU LIKED MY STORY. BUT I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW ONE THING----WHATS THE NAME OF YOR USER ON THE FORUM?
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Reviewed By: Jiece18 (Forgot to Login) On: March 07, 2004 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story!
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