| "Ravenous" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: VisserOne On: March 17, 2004 22:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, this fic is kinda scary... Pegasus is actually acting pure evil instead of merely childish. I really enjoy the emotional description. *weeps for Kaiba* I actually like Kaiba as the seme, and Pegasus conquering him to the degree you described truamatizes me a bit. But the angst factor is unparalled! Even if I cry through reading every chapter, I know I'll really enjoy it. Keep up the good work! And thank you so much for keeping Kaiba in charcter...he's not weak... the story would be cheapened if he were. Please, please, please update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Ana56 On: March 17, 2004 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's rare to see someone who can successfully explore Pegasus' inner feelings and thoughts like this. I like.
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Title: Sir (I Wish!)
Reviewed By: Mega Shadow On: March 11, 2004 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dammit Sam you coulda warned me before hand! Oh well...Next time use Sailors :P A good fic nontheless. It gets a 1 cause you grossed me out!
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