"Immortal Lessons" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Immortal Lessons Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 16:36 CDT Comment/Review: All right, you have a good start, the comradery between the Inu brothers, why and how it developed, and having Kagome owning a Great Dane, that was unexpected. Is this Kagome another reincarnation, or did the Shikon jewel shift everything around? I am very curious, I waited over a month before I asked these questions? I'd love an answer, and an update, and a Carl's Jr. superstar without pickles, but that's another story.
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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: April 05, 2004 21:31 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OH! Please update! This is wonderful. I haven't encountered a fic written like this since...well I can't remember! (Do you know how many times I had to look words up in the dictionary? You weren't kidding. Where were you when I needed to build up my voc for the SATs? LOL) This fic is extremely well written, and though, you gave that warning, it still surprised me. I don't think I'll ever get bored with the way you write! The characters are surprising and pleasingly fresh and realistic, n your opinion on drugs? That, too, was very surprising, n to write your characters as using such was something I did not expect to encounter in any fic. Tho I don't embrace the use of it, I commend you on ur originality.
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 20:06 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: A little hit now and then never hurt anyone ^_^ But I do have a question. If Kagome moved to the States when she was 6, how did she go on her Feudal adventure? Or is this an alternate reality created from her time travel experiences? If it's the same Kagome, she should've recognized Sesshomaru, right? *shrugs* I dunno. Just a couple of questions I had. I'm still enjoying your fic, though :)
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Reviewed By: Naishin no Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 03:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Glad to read a story on here that displays proper English skills. I must express my confusion over why the future seems to be different (considering that Kagome's family moved to the US when she was six, according to her), but I am assuming that will be told soon (and I'm assuming it has something to do with the Shikon no Tama). And yes, there's absolutely nothing wrong with marijuana. Can't wait to read more from you. I'm putting this on my favorites so that I don't lose track of it.
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Reviewed By: lammora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 20:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: ok a little comfused but i know you will probably clear it up, but does kagome not remember some things? or am i just really comfused. anywho I love this story even with my confustion. please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 21:45 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I really liked it. It was sweet, without being sentimental, poignant and well-written. I was particularly touched by the passages about Sesshomaru and Nora.
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Reviewed By: Mim On: March 08, 2004 22:18 CST Comment/Review: Interesting take on the Inu brothers...I still have difficulty seeing them so chummy together, but I'll see where you go with this. You write well (though a bit on the florid side) and I always appreciate a fanfic author who has familiarity with proper English usage and punctuation. Looking forward to your next chapter.
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Title: wow Reviewed By: Kagome 5701 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 20:57 CST Comment/Review: I like this one... its short but i really like it ^_^ inuyasha is one of my fav animes and i never put sessh. and inu living together it was really good.. ~Nikki~
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