| "Truth Behind the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amy_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 13:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good! I can't wait for the next chappie! Update Soon Plz!
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Title: La la la
Reviewed By: Toki and Marti On: April 24, 2004 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I likes it u should write more!!!! (Toki) wow Tsuki I'm amazed ur idiot hikari can write (Marti) Don't sound to enthusiastic I loved it it is fun!! (toki) Shut up young lady!!! U will do as ur Beautiful mother says. (Marti) Hell no!!! (Toki) Don't curse at me!!! * Bitch slaps Marti* (Marti) Child ABUSE!!!!!!!!! *kicks Toki* (toki) Marti-chan...don't u love me? (Marti) Do i have to answer that honestly? (Toki) *Glomps her* of course u love ur sexy mommy!!! (Marti) ....that's something u tell daddy (toki) Ur daddy's my suga daddy and I'm his Hot sexy lover!!!!(Marti) I'm gonna go...the main point of this was to tell u I love ur story, not Toki and Seth's nicknames 4 eachother
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Reviewed By: koumori wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there...this was awesome!!! awesome!!! awesome!!!...get the point? ^^;; well, please continue a.s.a.p. can't wait to know what happens ~ koumori wolf
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 18, 2004 22:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Confusing and did Ryou just cal;l Pegsy master? Weel, who else drinks a red liquid in the series? I can imagine Bakura doing it, but, he's never done that.
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Title: shadow ryou
Reviewed By: shaow brat On: March 11, 2004 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who is it? I think its bakura.
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Reviewed By: They Call me Blank On: March 09, 2004 09:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an intersting propogue. I would like to see you write more on this soon! I'll keep an eye out for this, but for now, I must leave, toodalo!
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