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Reviewed By: neongreenjesi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best lemon with those two Iv read so far. I hope you consider writting more! -Jesi
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting. The ending wasn't that corny...okay, kind of. I love Bakura/Malik, they're both evil and hot as hell. The lemon was well-written and detailed, and I think it's one of the most original PWPs I've ever read. And, surprise, they both seemed in character. Malik and a motorcycle, very cool. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Aneaniel(too lazy to sign in) On: May 02, 2004 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! I read and reread it and gets better! You need to write more of this stuff! This was utterly beautiful writing!! Mmm..Malik is so pretty *drooldrool* You're writing flowed so wonderfully...please! Please i beg you, write more!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 16:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Fuck! That was well written! Holy shit... I keep finding beeter writers on here all the time! Keep up the great work! Your lemons are simply delicious!
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Reviewed By: Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This rocks. The grammar could use help, and while the creativity is good/terrific, Bakura/Malik isn't very original-I'm not complaining I love Bakura/Malik (especially since I'm writing it myself), and I rarely find good Bakura/Malik lemons. Write more Bakura/Malik lemons pleeese! All right, I'm gunnu cut it out now.
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Reviewed By: The Shinigami Tenshi On: March 18, 2004 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. It's really well done, especially for being in first person. I liked it. ///_^ Thorn
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Reviewed By: The Future Schuyler On: March 13, 2004 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This should really be only rated R. This doesn't skip the turn-ons. ^_^ And it's got psychotic people in it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sukaigetsu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 01:38 CST
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Best smutfic in this fandom that I've read in... a while. (finally, someone who has a clue about how to write a PWP fic... drawing it out with lots of description, yeah.) The first chapter was especially good -- the whole "distracting Malik on the motorbike" part was wonderfully creative. A few cliched bits of prose here and there (mocha skin, tasting like spice, angelic lips, etc), but I suppose it's hard to write any kind of fic without a few cliches here and there, eh? But overall, great great fic. I'll be recommending this to my friends.
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