| "Yuna's New Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: where is the update
Reviewed By: Too long..... On: January 09, 2005 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fanfic is very good but i take it yer not updating any morte . . . too bad i reall enjoyed sum of it :( well have fun doin whatever yer doin now :(:(:(:(:(:(
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Reviewed By: i am canadian On: August 09, 2004 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOoooo I really like this fanfic i like the way you fuse dragon ball Z and final fantasy together PLEASE UPDATE SOON @_@ cus im gunna go craxy if u don't @_@ P.S its really good
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Title: when are you updating
Reviewed By: Sam from CAnada On: August 04, 2004 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked the fic but iwas wonderin when are you updating cause i wanna find out what happens . . . please update soon O_o!!!!!!!
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Title: DUDE!!!or Dudette
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is 1 of the coolest and most unexpected FF crossovers i`ve read.I don`t know where thi8s fic is going but I am pissed off that Tidus isn`t a good guy fighter.I love how long your chapters are and your grammer is fantastic.Review my fic and give me your real opinion.Instant message me and give me tips.Chow!
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Reviewed By: optimus610 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi :) The main problem I really have right now is your grammar at times. It wasn't awful, but could of been better in certain spots. Another is, I thought Gohan's explanation to Yuna was way too winded and much too detailed. Don't get me wrong, detail is good. But the way it was wriiten just didn't seem to fit. For me it took away from the story. Your doing a good job on your story. :) Nothing I said above was a flame, but just some helpful advice from a fellow author. :)
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Title: kick brolly,s cross dressing ass!!!(he should,nt wear that dress)
Reviewed By: hatemaster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 08:43 CST
Comment/Review:
kep on going this is one of the best crossovers i have ever read
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Title: what im here for
Reviewed By: the sexy simbrara On: March 17, 2004 07:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im silly i kkkkg
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Reviewed By: gohanstrife [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 15:46 CST
Comment/Review:
This could get a little humerous... DBZ mixed with FFX-2... I'd like to see what you have instore for our very diversed characters.
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