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| "Final Fantasy: Transcending Time" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Hiimbob979 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The storyline was definately original. You definately need to write a lot more of your story. The overall plot is pretty good, but I think that you may have Rial jumping around a bit too fast. I would like to please ask you to read my story as well, just do a search for anime type: final fantasy, it should be the first one, The Order of the Purple Robe. Thanx! And good luck!
| Reviewed By: Hiimbob979 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has very bad spelling and grammar. You may want to consider fixing some of that. The overall plot seems fairly interesting, though. Keep up the good work! And hey, read my story; it's called The Order of the Purple Robe. And leave me a review, too. Thanx!
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