| "Bleeding Ryou" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 04:22 CST
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very sad, but well written, I loved it
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Reviewed By: shadowwolfgirl (not logged in) On: December 01, 2004 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent, excellent story, I simply loved it. It made me cry when Ryou's mother died. Although, my eyes did sting from the tears for...some reason... o_O; I think it's cuz I got shampoo in my eyes weeks ago. Oh well, Great story :D
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Reviewed By: Gutterflower [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww this is sad!! I want to hug him!! continue please!
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Reviewed By: Dearest On: April 06, 2004 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, that was just about the most touching story I've ever read. I was totally blown away by how deep into the plot you got, and it actually made me cry (I havn't done that in a while, so it's a big thing for me). I've never actually seen the show that this fic was writen for (please no one beat me up, I realise this is practically sacrilegious to some of you, but I mean no offense) but it dosn't really seem to matter. I figured out generally who all of the characters are and worked out all of what was and has happened without complecation. All in all, this is a great fan fic which was beautifuly writen and it went deeper then I would have thought possible. Please write another one!
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Reviewed By: Velvet Rose (Hazel) On: March 23, 2004 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww it was so sad but great fic kept me entertained!
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Reviewed By: Jadie-sama On: March 18, 2004 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, really good. I like how you have really developed their characterisics so people know whats happening, even of they don't know the show. Keep up the good work -J
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 17:05 CST
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But... but... you can't do that to Ryou! *sulks in the corner* It was a good fic otherwise. And i know exactly how Ryou feels (considering I do the exact same thing, except the shower water is buring hot...). *goes and sulks in corner again*
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 18:46 CST
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*sniffles and starts crying again* Waaaaaaah! That's so sad! I knew Ryou was strong enough to stop Bakura if he wanted to, but he wants it! But he shouldn't have to do that!
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so sad of what happened when he was a child and that his dad blamed it on him. Poor Ryou. Anyways, just to tell u, he had a sister, Amane, though I believe she's dead. I don't know much abt her. Well it was a good story, keep writing.
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