| "Sixteen Candles" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: babygurl_tiff On: August 18, 2005 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: pan and trunks fan On: July 27, 2004 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is...different. The whole Bura having Gohan's child. This is the first time I ever read something like that and to my surprise it turned out well. I got confused at who the father was since you had a good way of having Gohan and Goten in the right places. What happens to Trunks and Pan, did they get together I hope so. It says that this fic. is complete but it doesnt seem like it.
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Reviewed By: pan and trunks fan On: July 27, 2004 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is...different. The whole Bura having Gohan's child. This is the first time I ever read something like that and to my surprise it turned out well. I got confused at who the father was since you had a good way of having Gohan and Goten in the right places. What happens to Trunks and Pan, did they get together I hope so. It says that this fic. is complete but it doesnt seem like it.
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Reviewed By: wawashkesh On: April 20, 2004 14:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Seems that Gohan aught to look in the mirror. Or maybe that is what he's done? Wonder if Ethan's origins are ever going to come out?
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