| "Bulma's Tail" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Tae-Vegeta/Trunks-Princess On: March 09, 2010 03:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! This is the best fan fic ever!! Vegeta is so friggin HOT!! I love the story line it is very original. I love your comic as well "Bulma's Tail." You need to post more up!! Now please excuse me - I am off to read the sequel. BOY OH BOY WAS THE LEMON (NUMBER 2) SO HOT - Vegeta can talk dirty to me anytime. LOL
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Reviewed By: CrecyM On: June 30, 2009 12:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
FUNNY!!! I love your writing style. Its awesome. Great story!
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Title: Neko_Chaos
Reviewed By: Neko_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great story so far, I just got done reading chapter 17 I beleive... and i just wanted to let you know that if you where pregnant and you got an x-ray, especially in the area that Bulma has her tail, it would kill the fetus. When you get x-rays they make you sign forms stating that your not pregnant. Any way i'm really enjoying this story and i'm going to go back to reading it now.
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Title: You are a godess
Reviewed By: slaveoftrunks On: September 19, 2004 17:00 CDT
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Oh my god!!! You are a goddess...I love your story. it was totally like...BLUMA'S GOT A TAIL. And then it was totally like, NOW SHE DOESN'T and then it was all WOAH now she does!!!!! sorry...on a sugar high. Yeah so I just wanted to say your story was great, and I'm off to read the sequel, and ask you to read and review my fan poem. It's called LOVE and it's not about Veggie or Bulma, but it's about Trunks and Pan. Thanks.... Mel. PS- yeah see now i'm just trying to see how many characters I can use up. Once again....love the story. ON TO THE SEQUEL. DUNT DUN DUN DUNN DUNN DUNNANNA NANANANANANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Veglma, A Insane Reader On: August 12, 2004 22:02 CDT
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*Take out a camera and take a picture* MuHahaha! I have a picture of Vegeta's shocked face!*does a happy dance*
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Reviewed By: Elenek *not logged in* On: April 28, 2004 18:55 CDT
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This is me doing the happy dance. I can't wait for Bulma to get her Tail back and for Vegeta to come home and find out its there. This is such a fun fic.
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Reviewed By: EleneK [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 22:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another fine job. I'm always dissapointed when there's no more. I want more.
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Title: Bulma's Tail
Reviewed By: FlamingSayain On: April 11, 2004 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought u did a awsome job. can't wait til u finish it. ur the best writer i have read.
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic, though you might wish for a beta reader. Definitely original with Bulma wishing for a Saiyajin tail. I'm looking forward to seeing exactly how she's going to word her wish. Very nice Vegeta. =) Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Elenek (not logged on) On: April 11, 2004 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Evil Lisa Grin* Thanks for updating.
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Title: More, pleas, More!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl23 On: April 07, 2004 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic! I love how you've kept Vegeta in character and everything. And Bulma making a Saiyan tail is very original! Please update soon so we can get to the lemony part!
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA *not logged in* On: March 26, 2004 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINNALY U POSTED HERE YIPYYYYYYYYYY! THANK GOD!!! LATERS BRING THE LEMON!!!!! THE LEMON!!!!!!! LOL! UPDATED SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!
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