| "If Love was Real" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: i love it
Reviewed By: neko88 On: March 13, 2005 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the fanfic, you really need to right more im one the edge of my seat waiting please and thank you
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Reviewed By: Genevieve On: May 08, 2004 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey ur story is so good, Good job. U r so vreative. Good jOB.hoPE U CONTINUE SOON.
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Reviewed By: GemJewelR On: April 28, 2004 18:52 CDT
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great new chpt. are the g-boys's store going to be attacked by Gretchen or somthin? plz update soon!!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 23:43 CDT
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plz update with a new chpt. cause that chpt was there before.
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 19:12 CDT
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this is a wonderful fiction!! do the Hudsons find her, do the g-boys learn about her past? plz update soon!! what happens to the girls? and how did nina get into this fic? who is she exactly? very original and very good! as i said plz plz plz plz! update soon. thanx
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Title: WoW!
Reviewed By: Jacqueline Lanchi Nguyen On: April 20, 2004 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really good gurlfren! i enjoyed it bunches!!! i like the plot... but i kinda got confused around the BAM he got hit part.. but its alrighty-o.... im just kinda sleepy right now too.... *yawn* welps LATERS!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WRITING!
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Reviewed By: Anni On: April 17, 2004 23:05 CDT
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this was cool. i liked how Hotaru beat the test and beat up the kid who tried to rob the store. I bet Wufei isn't gonna be happy when he sees she beat the test, and had a pretty high score at that! - Tatra
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Reviewed By: mskat On: April 17, 2004 22:18 CDT
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dang ! good job, man, but the chapter ended to fast.. i want more! need more!! it`s like a drug! lols. i can't wait to see what happens next! keep on writing my talented fanfic writing cousin! (=
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Reviewed By: medium cy On: April 17, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice FanFic, Kathy! Good Job! Can't wait to read more! i'm finally done reading it..lolz =)
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Reviewed By: medium cy On: April 17, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Nice FanFic, Kathy! Good Job! Can't wait to read more! i'm finally done reading it..lolz =)
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Reviewed By: wiggly On: April 17, 2004 00:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good job. Nicely written. Just up date
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Reviewed By: Anni On: April 03, 2004 13:27 CST
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this chapter was good. i guess working with the gundam boys would be dangerous to your health. they have lots of training so they'd be better than everyone else, though I think Hotaru would make it. I like the fact that petite Hotaru is gunna be a mechanic... - Tatra
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Reviewed By: Anni [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 17:37 CST
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this is a good fic. I like Duo's reaction to Hotaru when she said we wanted a job. can't wait for the next chapter. if you want to put gundam wing in the category list then all you have to do is hit the Crtl key and then click on Gundam Wing, it doesn't hurt the computer to hold down the Ctrl key for more than 5 seconds.... and sorry if you didn't want to hear that - Tatra
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Reviewed By: Cindi On: March 20, 2004 23:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice story!
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Reviewed By: DK On: March 20, 2004 23:09 CST
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Nice story! I really hope you update it soon! ^-^
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