| "Last Song" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Title: love the story
Reviewed By: hrmlz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 14:07 CDT
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Hey like the title says I love this story especially when Inuyasha is about the get some but in the end dosen't. About you dad sorry my grandpa already died from cancer.
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Reviewed By: ToDifferentToBeReal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 10:45 CST
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I'm sorry to hear about your dad and even though I love this story and can't wait until the next chap you have the right not to post its your story and you can finish it when ever you want.
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Reviewed By: alatero [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 00:30 CDT
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I am so sorry to hear about your dad. My mom had cancer so I sorta know what you're going through. Please update, but only after you have spent as much time as possible with your father. I hope he recovers and Godspeed. (Oh and by the way.....this is an awesome story!)
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Title: wtf?
Reviewed By: The FanFic Critic On: September 27, 2005 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
...What's this doing the SAK section? Shouldn't it be in the Inuyasha section? Nevertheless, I strongly believe you need to polish up on your writing skills. Hardly any descriptive language. You need description if you want to keep your readers entertained. I mean, despite the fact we already know what they look like, you should still put in the information. Eg: "Kagome's brown eyes narrowed angrily, her lips pursing. The light fingers of the wind that strayed from the open window toyed with her raven hair, flicking it around her.". Feh, that sounded much better than any of the paragraphs you wrote, and that was a mere example. And what about the background? Dude, where are they? What does the place look like? I read the first chapter and I'm like, "Wtf is going on?" What happened to make them successful in the media industry? Take that into consideration. Add a bit of background to your story. It just seems really type-write. Slightly predictable plot was used. Sometimes I couldn't tell who said what. Too brief. Looks like you made it up in five minutes. It seems as though no thought was put into it. Mind you, this ain't a flame, it's constructive criticism. Learn from your mistakes and improve on it. If you couldn't handle it, I'm sorry. --- Want to discuss it further? Send to starsparkles89@hotmail.com. --- The FanFic Critic
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Title: no prob
Reviewed By: eViL kAgOmE [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i still love you!!! so whever you can update and i cant wait to read it. hope your dad gets better. Just dont forget to update when you can. Just love your story!! -_
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Reviewed By: morgan rond On: January 17, 2005 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's funny. now update i comand it.(ha ha i'm joking...sort of)and F.Y.I that fluffy thing on Sessh is not his tail it's part of his outfit ^-^ gomen na.
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 10:28 CDT
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you have to update!!please, this is so good and so funny!
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 22:23 CDT
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more i want more please update
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Reviewed By: Asako On: July 11, 2004 14:39 CDT
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really like ur fic keep up the good work and keep updating!
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Reviewed By: AnimeFreakNikore [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 19:43 CDT
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Oh my....I don't even know you or your friends but when I read this, I swear I cried. I really did! That's so sweet and touching...I can't help but cry....
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Title: UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LadyHecate [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2004 23:38 CDT
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i don't normally get this into a fanfic so you should feel blessed but if you don't update soon i swear i will delve into black magick and hex you.
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Reviewed By: muffin bandit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 00:19 CDT
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I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!! i even told all my friends bout it,and if u update soon u will be our favorite tee hee hee ^_______________^
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Title: ^_~ ^_^ -_- @_@ $_$ *_*
Reviewed By: iowa chic On: June 19, 2004 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story! ^_^ This story really made me laugh! And some of my favorite songs were on it! ^_^ I really like Good Charlotte so you should have more of their songs in there! One of my favorite that I think you should put in is Girls & Boys. Okay? ^_^ and again great story. And I sorta agree with you on the whole Titanic movie but it was okay. Nothing I really want to see twice but it wasn't a complete waste of my time.
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Title: = what?
Reviewed By: iowa chic On: June 19, 2004 20:55 CDT
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I haven't read the story yet (don't worry I'm going to) but I was just wonderingin the paragraph you said that 2 bands + 1 world tour = 3 well I was just wondering = 3 what? well now I'm going to read your story review when I'm done. ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
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Title: Last Song
Reviewed By: Mickey Boo On: June 17, 2004 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated the story so high because it was blazing except for the spelling mistakes. keep writing your amazing but i will hurt her if she doesn't put the next story on tommorrow.forget about military warfare.
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