Title: What Did I just read?
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um I wasn't sure what I just read, it's a good idea, but it could of been elaborated on, Like how did the boys become pregnant( I mean what was the reason for it, who was behind it) Also how did they have the children? I mean, were they turned into girls? Cause its impossible for a guy to have a baby( Was there magic involved or something else?). I think it would of been alot better if there were more details added, into the story. Hope to read some more of your stories .
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