| "Wake Up Call" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Wake Up Call
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 18:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: Lady Morrigan On: September 10, 2005 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goddess, what is it with men writing about blow jobs? It's a little gross to me....odd... but whatever. Your story, well, it isn't too horrible, I guess. *is not really sure what to think*
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Title: more please
Reviewed By: matt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more chapters i want to know what happens next and i want to know if Dorthy gets pregnant
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Title: Wake Up Call
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 13:03 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: ^_-
Reviewed By: Gemini II On: November 12, 2004 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I remember reading this on fanfiction.net! I thought I might never see it again. I enjoyed the second chapter too. I hope you will write the next one. I really want to see what happens with our "Love Triangle"!^_-
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Title: O.O ^_^
Reviewed By: Khitoutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not trying to be offensive, but make some stronger lemon! great, this website has me as sex obsessed as that horny ass ex-boyfriend of mine! oh well, and it's spelled 'come' by the way. other than that reoccuring spelling error, and the totally minor-suitable lemon, this fic is AWESOME! please continue, with stronger lemon! (hint-hint-nudge-nudge-poke-poke)
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Reviewed By: Psycho_Z [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
A pretty minor lemon, it tided me over for a little bit, so I guess it works.
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: Daggon_dora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry, it might take longer to continue then I thought, I wasn't really planing on making this into an entire fic. I have some ideas I just have to put them into words. So thank everyone for baring with me.
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Reviewed By: LovesTheException On: March 21, 2004 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! Great to hear theres going to be another chapter, The suspence is killing me.
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Reviewed By: Daggon_dora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 18:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank everyone for reviewing, I am working on the second chapter. It might take a while, but it will be up within a few days
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Reviewed By: hanyou911 On: March 19, 2004 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good,plz make a continuation!!!(makes puppy-dog pout)
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Reviewed By: Shippochan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good keep it up. Write more please.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Ultaraguyver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story and nice ending so please continue.
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