| "Azumi's Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan1 On: May 04, 2004 04:10 CDT
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hey, good end, don't care about the fluff^^ just the Aya/Nagi pairing (?) I don't like much, but well, tastes are different, that's nothing new, ne ^-^.Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: wannabeinanime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 13:35 CDT
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AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH! You killed Farfie! And you wrote fluff. I don't care if you say you are feeling fine, someone must be controling your brain. I did like the story though. Poos Yohji, I hate the stairs too. Kind of a sad end, but you fluffed it over. You are broken I say! You may need those weapons after all. Don't stop writing over the summer, I need something to waste my time on. Ja!
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Reviewed By: wannabeinanime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 00:29 CDT
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UG!!!!! Ahhhhhh, too much fluff crap! Who broke you? I hope to have some serious angst in this last chapter. Schuldig is so cute when I imagine him with Ken-ken. Get on with the story already, I'm dying here, even though I know why it's taking so long to update. Take a baseball bat to the evil computer! Take out all that pent up aggression so you can get on with the creative writer thoughts that we both know I don't possess. OK, done with my mini rant now. Update soon! Ja! :)
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 11:34 CDT
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Gah, sorry for not having reviewed the last time, I was really busy and not quite in the mood, gomen! I'm still enjoying it so far and *giggle* Ken has a crush on Schu? *lol*...normally I don't like Schu x Ken pairings that much but times have changed and I think I'm going to like it more^^. Keep going! Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: misstara On: April 22, 2004 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is great I look forward to another update soon... :)
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Reviewed By: wannabeinanime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 15:48 CDT
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Oh, look at me go! I figured it out! Yeah! Anyway, onto the actual review. I like the way that you show the different sides of the teams, afterall, everyone should be forced to have breakfast with their "family". I wanna hear Schuldig sing! Thanks for not making the weiss guys have a miracle recovery and be fine the next day. I really hate that. I love Manx in this chapter as well, mainly because I refuse to believe that she could work with them for so long without forming some kind of attachment. Your floral arrangements were right on the money for descibing your characters. And I have to say it... since when do you call them cigarettes? As I recall, they are "cancer sticks"! Well, keep up the good work and hurry up and rescue Azumi. I feel bad for her, she's so sweet.
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Reviewed By: wannabeinanime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 22:08 CDT
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Thank you so much for not making Farfarello an idiot just because he's insane. I love your Yohji! He is such a goon, it's great. Nice fight scene by the way. Wish there had been a little more but that's just me. You are keeping yourself out of trouble by updating regularly. That way I don't have to nag. I really feel bad for Azumi, but I love the spin you have on Nagi's character. I wasn't so sure about it at first, but you are writing it very well. Keep it up U.G.!
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 06:07 CDT
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Oh, a chappie for me *blink*....cool ^_^, thank you! And you know what, I liked it^^...the fight and all. The most I liked the part where Ken and Schuldig were fighting *g*. Oh, I still would read your fic, even if there wouldn't be more fighting scenes, so don't worry ^_^.Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 04:45 CST
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heyo ^_^...ah want to see Weiß and Schwarz fighting against another^^;;...*sigh* good chappie ^_^. I'm already waiting for your next update *grin*.Ja Ko-chan^^
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Reviewed By: wannabeinanime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 14:42 CST
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Hey UG (that's your new name now because i hate typing the whole thing). I like the new chapter, very cute. The story is actually holding my interest... congrats, it's a hard thing to do. Keep the updates coming and you won't have to hear me bitch! Something to strive for, ne? Good job so far!
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Reviewed By: Kalli On: March 21, 2004 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good! And I love how you have Botan back into the picture. I always wondered what Aya-kun felt after Botan died. Botan was awesome man, awesome! This was completely oringial. At leats your story line is. I can't wait to see waht you have in store!
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 07:09 CST
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I like it really much so far! The thought of Weiß and Schwarz fighting against another is great, I always like that when my two favourite assassin groups are going against one another *grin*. Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: wannabeinanime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 18:05 CST
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Congrats on becoming the UBER GOOBER. After your bitch fest about no reviews, I decided to write you one. I like the story so far. My favorite parts are the glove stealing Yoji and th orange streak! yeaaaahhh. Type faster woman!
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