| "Captive Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 19:35 CDT
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Your story is amazingly written, and extremely captivating. I hardly moved from my computer for hours. It was absolutely brilliant. Are you going to write a sequel, about the collar and the Shikon no Kakera?
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Title: LOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful story! I feel, though, that you planned a sequal... I will search, and see if you changed your pen name! Great Story!!!!
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Reviewed By: L_amor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 15:22 CDT
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UPDATE
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Reviewed By: L_amor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Jin Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. Gosh. WHAT AN AMAZING FANFIC!!! You are a very talented author with great writing skill. The plot, the wording, everything was FANTASTIC! I especially love it when their Inu Youkai instincts kick in. Please, PLEASE, continue this story, with another chapter or a whole new story, it doesn't matter. I just want to see the rest. THANK YOU for a wonderful story!!! -Jin Ryu
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Title: captive soul
Reviewed By: pookymoni On: June 06, 2005 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it and have reviewed this story once before but I really wanna know what happens at the end where you have Kikyo planning a way to get Inuyasha. What happens there? Can you email me and let me know? My email is cove-chicago1991@hotmail.com if you can email me please do I would truly appreciate it.
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Title: captive soul
Reviewed By: pookymon On: May 30, 2005 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love iy and was wondering if you are through with the story or is there a sequel please update soon. I might cry if you don't*sniff sniff*PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: slivercat On: April 06, 2005 21:57 CDT
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Hey Ras, it's been a year, won't you please update? Are you still alive even?
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Reviewed By: Lady Drow On: March 18, 2005 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I really love your story. Please, continue writing it.
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Reviewed By: buddythecat On: August 25, 2004 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything about this fic is perfect. The only conplaint I have is its been so long since you updated. I started reading this fic on ff.net, and I have been waiting for months for the next chapter. Be assured, your fic is worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: ScentOfLavander [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 15:08 CDT
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oops, when i said august, i meant april! i was thinking that since THIS was august, its been a long time!
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Reviewed By: ScentOfLavander [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 15:06 CDT
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wow! was the last time you updated really in August?! i am one of your lesser fans from back when this was on ff.net. i never really reviewed actually, but i was worried you DIED or something cause its been so long since you wrote another chapter for the story! btw, i absolutely looooove it! this has got to be the best inuyasha fanfic ive ever read! i love the rin/sesshoumaru pairing, but this is the only story ive read where an OOC sessy is okay. hope you continue!! and sooon! take my review to heart and please keep going! ~~aliya Morihano
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Title: READ ME :)
Reviewed By: booger On: May 18, 2004 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE your story. It's what made me like reading fanfiction. I look forward to the rest of the story as well. I REALLY want to read the rest! I love your descriptions. Please don't feel depressed either, you're too good for that, but it IS unfair what fanfiction.net did to your chapter. See! I even followed you to mediaminer.org just to read your stories!
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Reviewed By: Candice (Candy on ff.net :)) On: May 06, 2004 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is the best 1 i've really ever read and i mean it honestly!! soo yea im glad that i found this site, cuz im comp. illiterate... sooo YAY mediaminer!! boo ff.net!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LLJade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 01:32 CDT
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Add more! Please! This fic rocks! I hope Kikyo's death is a slow and painful one!
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Reviewed By: LLJade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 23:25 CDT
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*gets on her knees and bows before you* I am not worthy! I am not worthy! I am not worthy! Please update this fic soon! This is one of the best Rin/Sess stories I have read so far! I hope Sess's is going to be okay, I want to see him get payback on Kikyo! And I hope they find a way for him to have children, he would make such a cool dad!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 16:09 CST
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OMG this is a great story! One of the most interesting AU ive ever read! Sess is really cool as is Rin. It was Really funny when Rin said Naraku is just plain creepy haha. Also is inuyasha going to come in the picture? Maybe Kagome's slave? Well this was very good and i look forward to more!
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