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Title: Behind Blue Eyes
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, there. So glad to see that this story has nbeen updated! You are right though Hilde really is a she-devil! My goodness! I couldn't believe the things that she was saying and doing and then she had the nerve to attack Heero in order to get to her son. I'm glad someone took this situation in hand before it got even more out of control than it was. I'm glad Heero was there to protect and soothe Cameron from his mom, but I really had no idea of the damage that Hilde had been inflicting on their son. Well, now that she has been arrested I know that this is by no means over so I simply can't wait to read more so please post again soon. Nice chapter!
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Reviewed By: shi-tenshi On: October 04, 2005 08:25 CDT
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FINALLY! Yay you updated! poor Heero. I do feel sorry for him right now, all that guilt and regret can't be good for a guy. plus Duo had the nerve to ask him why it would matter that when Quatre and Trowa came to visit they brought him. I mean at that moment I thought 'Duo you really are the baka Heero always said you were! I mean COME ON you're his ex AND he obviously still loves you. moron.' tch. Well I hope he gets his act together soon and gets back together with his true love (Heero NOT Hilde XP). Well anyways hope you update soon. ja ne. p.s. wtf? why is the bitch back in the story? you've got some major explaining to do and make it fast.
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Reviewed By: Astrael On: September 26, 2005 18:16 CDT
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What a horrible thing to do! Cliffies! Ugh. Anywho, I love the story, love the writing, and totally love it in general. Cool.
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Reviewed By: demonsbaby69777 On: September 24, 2005 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you write more really soon. I think this fic is great so far.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 11:25 CDT
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE NOOOOOOWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!::FAINTS FROM NOT CONSTANT WAIL::....::HOLDS UP 10+ SIGN::
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Title: HEY!!!!
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: September 23, 2005 06:06 CDT
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Ohayo! You finally updated one of your sories, I am very greatful that you did, you know I love your stories and I have been waiting.. not to patiently but I've been waiting to see an email in my inbox telling me you updated one of you stories. Thank you for the review on fanfiction, I am trying to get the next chapter to Solitude up though I am still typing it and revising the copy I wrote in my writing book. But Thank you for the review, I like seeing things like that from authors I respect. Anyways such good stuff, as expected and I do hope you will be updating another one soon.. personally I'd said you should update the one with Heero and Duo being princes and such, that's a personal fav of mine.. ok well I love all of your stories. Anyways until next time Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero *much love and huggles* ^.^
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Title: behind blue eyes
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I just had a chance to read this story and I must say that I was pleasantly surprised. This is a really good story and I really like Duo's son Cameron. He is really such a sweetheart. Hilde by the way is terrible! I can't believe that she became so bitter and cruel! As for Duo he has turned out to be a complete jerk when it comes to Heero, but he is great with his son and the rest of the pilots. In a way I wish that Heero could have found someone else to love and to heal with, but that doesn't look like that will be the case. I also really like Sally in this story. She has such a warm and nurturing presence. She has really been there for Heero and I'm sure that Heero ultimatley appreciates it even though he just recently acted like a jerk to her and his fellow pilots. At least he apologized for his behavior and tried to make ammends with Cameron and the others. I think that therapy was a very good idea for both Heero and Cameron. This will be way for them to vent and to explore their feelings about things that they have been keeping inside. Now Hilde actually had the nerve to show up at Sally and Wufei's home! I can't wait to read the next chapter of this and see what happens. Very nice story!
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Reviewed By: Jade1154 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 22:06 CDT
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AHHHHHHH!!! you so bad! leaving it there like that!! this was a wonderfull chapter!! i cant wait for more updates!!!
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: September 22, 2005 20:43 CDT
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I am so glad that you updated. I have been out of the fic world for a while. I am expecting another child in the next two months. I have been so busy in RLF. I finally have time now that I am getting things set. I can not wait to see what Hilde has to say for the abuse and etc. I am certain that CPS must have already contacted her since it would be priority since it is not a assumption but as fact. I wonder what she is going to say to Heero and if Duo is going to stick up for Heero. Will Duo confess what she has done to their son in front of all. If so, will you be making Heero come out of some of the sadness in order to help protect the ones he loves?
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Reviewed By: aynia (who's too lazy to sign in) On: September 22, 2005 16:12 CDT
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one day after my birthday ^^ thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: Tsen On: September 22, 2005 15:00 CDT
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TOTALLY EVIL CLIFFIE! *pout* love the story though.
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Reviewed By: Becca23 On: September 22, 2005 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the premise, but the devolopmente is rushed, facts are not explained, Duo is complete asshole without justification and although I enjoy a sensitive Heero, this one is too girly and weak. The dialogs could be better arranjed and you could try to put a little more soul into the characterization, this is very shallow but I've seen worst. You may think I'm totally flaming you, but that's not the case, I'm actually hoping you improve in your writing because as I said, I liked the premise of this story.
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Title: UUUMMMM?????
Reviewed By: Birdy666 On: August 30, 2005 20:40 CDT
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Not to be pushy but (peeks around at all the other people waiting for and update) can we have some more please soon I keep checking back with baited breath hopeing against all hope that a new chapter will be looking back at me from my monitor screen I've already reread this story again while waiting its so good so hope you update soon (HEAVES A BIG SIGH!!!!!!).
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Reviewed By: lil sesshomarus girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 23:27 CDT
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PLEASE add more I got know know if Duo can punch him harder then he could. and if lil camyrn can get Duo and Heero to talk the problem out.
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Reviewed By: WatcherWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful. Please update soon.
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