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| "Behind Blue Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Title: mischakitsune456@yahoo.com email me if you want ^_~
Reviewed By: MischaKitsune On: July 26, 2005 06:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to follow the advice since this is my first review on the site. Your style of writing keeps my attention incredibly well. I love it. ^_^ The spelling and grammar really could use some work, but it's definitely not the worst I've seen so I'm giving it a 6. The originality...Well, it's really a bunch of things that I love all being thrown into one, so it's creative and yet not. The enjoyment factor...OMG! I'm dying to read the next chapter! I swear, reviewing is KILLLING ME! XD This is a very, very, very good and entertaining story. Unfortunately, I have to give it an 8. ^_^ I've read things that make your story pale by comparison, but I've read things that make your story look like the best piece of work on the planet. ^_^ All of them fanfics, so you don't have to worry about being compared to the big dogs. I love Heero-chan! I was always said that he had tan skin because I love pale people and though he looks good tan he'd look so good pale, too! I really enjoy Cameron, even though I personally don't feel a strong connection to or care for children. I feel that Hilde was out of character, but that's only because I really didn't have a problem with her. In fact, I really liked her. I like Duo/Heero better, but I don't mind Duo/Hilde. XD I saw the show before I knew what yaoi was. Or anime, for that matter. OMG! I was at that A-kon! I was only going with friends and didn't know that was Duo! I'm so sad cause of that. Okay, I'll stop talking now. Excellent chapter! ^_~ | Reviewed By: aynia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 14:02 CDT
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Wow, this meeting was quite tense! It seems Heero has to open up a bit (more) but I'm sure Cam-chan will gladly help his tenshi with that. ^^ And one thing is for sure, those ex-Gundam pilots are a lot braver than me - they don't even hesitate to take a shower then there's a thunderstorm outside - I know it should be save to do so but well, I'm not that fond of thunderstorms and taking risks.. ^^
| Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 12:09 CDT
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Hey! I started reading this a while back when there wasn't as many chaps. It'll take me a long time to catch up. Duo is such an ass from what I remember of this. Will he get back with Heero?
| Title: All Right!!
Reviewed By: birdy666 On: June 24, 2005 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First time checking back since the 5 month gap and find three new chapters, glad to see this fic is still going I love the Camron character. I know that most people are probably saying oh my god Heero is so ooc but the new softness can be a good thing for a nurturing parent I've seen it work in other stories, but he did need just a little bit of toughing up so that was ok. I hope he is going to apologize to Sally he was a major bastard there to her. I also thought that the scene with Duo at the end was priceless got a good chuckle out of that one. The look that must have been on Heero face at being treated like a kid throwing a tantrum (heh-snort) priceless just priceless. So keep up the good work and update soon can not hardly wait to read more and see what happens next.
| Reviewed By: gaelan On: June 09, 2005 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the final scene is really surprising. Heero has become quite a bastard but that's okay. i don't think that i would have written it any different if it were me. umm... still like the kid. hope you continue building his character up. and don't forget to keep toughening Heero up. that's all for now i think. thanks, and please update as soon as possible. please,please,please,please (a hundred times.)
| Reviewed By: Jade1154 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!! i lover this chapter you were right it turned out wonderfly!!! i cant wait too see the next update!!!
| Reviewed By: Crazeme On: May 31, 2005 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. The idea of Duo having a son is too cute. Please continue, I can hardly wait to see what you come up with next.
| Title: fujinakaheero (not signed in)
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello!!! I ish back to review yet again =D How are you? Live been treating you well? Well I hope so, I'm glad you got around to updating again, I was wondering when you would update this story again and I was waiting patiently, this was such a sad chapter, even though everyone was getting up in each other's faces, it was sad because there was so much hurt that it just kept building up into angry, aww soo sad.... v.v but I'm just glad to finally see how it went, though I didn't expect Heero to all of a sudden go to Cam and hug him, I thought he was just gonna leave like he said he would. Anyways, I should stop, my review is starting to get long, so I shall wait again. Great story, I must say it again because it's the truth ^.^ Anyways, talk to you in the next review I giva ya. Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero ((^.^)) P.S. perfect 10, you deserve it =D
| Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (Nsi) On: May 30, 2005 12:57 CDT
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Yay Heero! He yelled at Duo w00t! lol I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! -Till Then!
| Reviewed By: gaelan On: May 26, 2005 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story was totally cool, and quite original really. i have not read anything about Heero being anorexic yet, hehehe. Cameron is quite an original character too, as for the way he talks, you could make him use one set of tense rules like eated, runned, writed and stuff like that. i have read that that was how kids form their language durung those stage. the part about Heero as a tenshi is something that i totally agree to. one thing though, Heero seems very delicate, and although you were able to make it work in the fic, could you just give him a little bit more backbone? please? i really love Heero and i want him to be stronger.
| Reviewed By: emeanor On: May 22, 2005 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Basically,the story progress and plot is good.Characters' feelings and actions are also conveyed,but it lacks a little more angst.Looking more into Heero's thoughts and feelings and adding some climax or actions will help to bring the fic further another stage too.Continue writing the fic,it is very well done!Most importantly,finish it up -readers need a closure too! (smile) $Emeanor~
| Reviewed By: aynia On: April 06, 2005 08:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter! The meeting (or better confrontation?) seems to be inevitable now! Poor He-chan... *hugs He-chan plushie* but I'd say it's high time he talked to Duo - running and hiding are no options anymore. I'm looking forward to the next part! See ya! ~aynia ^^V
| Title: Kaneechewa!
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: March 20, 2005 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O0o0o, great chapter, even though the juicy stuff isn't gonna happen 'til next chapter, so that means you must update with a new chapter very soon. As I've told you in my other review, I love this story! and I'm not sugar coating you, it's a great story!! It's sooo sad too... my poor hee-chan *pulls heero out and glomps him* oh, I also started to read your new story, great story so far and I hope you'll update that one too. I think your a great author and keep up the good work with your stories 'cause I'd hate to see your stories be discontinued. Anyways until your next chapter for this story Ja Ne! ~fujinakaheero~
| Reviewed By: Jade1154 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaa!! this is great!!!! update soon!!! *Himiko-chan*
| Reviewed By: laina On: March 19, 2005 11:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC. >__< I DEMAND YOU WRITE MORE...onegai? ;.;...
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