| "Fears of the Savage Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Couldn't stop!
Reviewed By: Woobaby [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just found this story on my lunch break at work and I couldn't stop reading till I finished your latest chapter. This is an amazing story!!! I like the characterization of a demonized Kagome. I think it is great that it's like YYH. Her new instincts are written very well and I like that you made her lose her main miko powers. It makes more sense that way and is much more believable. The other characterizations are great too. I loved the scene of the beginning of the "chase". I liked the humor. LOL okay, I love pretty much all of the story!!!!
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Reviewed By: KouseiJL [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 22:47 CDT
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I know there were many good reasons for disliking Kikyo... ^^ Yet another one! Smart thinking on Miroku's part. I like the fact that the two of them don't need to say much to each other to know what's going on/what they're thinking. They've been close friends that long. Now Kouga's involved? Hmm... I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work!!!! (sorry mine's taking sooo soo long... I gotta write myself out of corners^^) I'll be waiting for the next one!! Kousei
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Title: great update
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugii On: April 04, 2004 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story gets better abd better i like how inu turned lol and miroku was the one with the spell lol that was cool please update soon ill keep watching for it
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Title: yayyyyyyyyy
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugii On: March 23, 2004 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayyyyyy u updated please keep going update soon the story is going to be great
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Reviewed By: KouseiJL On: March 23, 2004 00:15 CST
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Ahh... short but sweet^^. I liked it. There really wasn't too much that happened, but that's ok. OH, and don't worry about updating as much.^^ I'm sure most of us would much rather have you write a good chapter that you really like than have you update every five minutes!^^ We'll love you anyways...even if the suspense kills us! Keep up the great work! It's promising to be really good! Kousei
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Reviewed By: KouseiJL On: March 17, 2004 23:41 CST
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Heehee... Inu shouldn't strip like that with all these readers around! ^-~ I like the detail you put into everything...I got a good visual of Inu's apartment. Kind of looked for a little more action, but then again, you need chapters like this to get things going. ^^ Great start on your first fic! Keep it up! Can't wait for more! Kousei
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Title: yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely love the second chapter wow dont worry about reviews on this site seems they are all peeps and dont review but look at how many hits u have u know lots are reading ^_^ please keep writing
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Reviewed By: KouseiJL On: March 16, 2004 06:45 CST
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I like! I especially like the detail you put into each character's appearance.^^ Mmm... Inu in the Matrix get-up... *stops self from drooling* Hehe..sorry. I like the unique spin you put on it. I can't wait to read more! I hope your next chapter is just as good as your first! Keep up the great work! Kousei
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Title: yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugii On: March 16, 2004 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayyyyyyyyyy i absolutely lovvvvvvvve it!!!!! please keep writing it!!!!!!! I can't wait till the next chappy!!! I wanna see what happens!!!! GRADE A++++++++ fanfic ^_^
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