| "Pain" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Pain
Reviewed By: Witch Huntress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much. I first read it on ff.net. I noticed quite a bit of spelling/grammar errors so if you'd like a beta, you can e-mail me (my address is on my account on ff.net under Sakaki's Girl.) There are lots of readers/reviewers waiting to see what happens next. Alas, I know hard it is to get off your ass and update but please update soon. Ciao! -WH
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Title: Pain
Reviewed By: Witch Huntress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so much. I first read it on ff.net. Please update it soon. Its been over a year that you've updated on fanfiction.net and I (along with TONS of other reviewers here on mm.org and ff.net)have been waiting for a review FOREVER. Now I know how hard it is to update when you have a short attention span. I noticed quite a bit of spelling errors and sometimes it was hard to know who you were talking about so if you ever need a beta, you can e-mail me if you'd like. Ciao. -SG
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Title: That's what happens when I'm late.
Reviewed By: The 7th Toprahim [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's Yohji! Something about those boys just make them so versatile that they can slip into any modern-set fandom. A handful of mistakes, regarding grammar and spelling, and then there's the confusion of using too many pronouns when you want to audience to be absolutely sure they know who's being talked about. There'll also a couple of other miffs I have, but much is left for another time. ...And then there's the fact that you've got chapter 2 inverted with chapter 1. *blink* Lookit the drop-down menu for the chapters. Otherwise, I can't help but read on. Takahashi's the kind of twisted and demented person I like, and the fact he continues to target Sakaki....it warms my sadomasochistic heart. laa~
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Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 21:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Holy f*cking crap! *gets blindsided by the whole Amon thing* didn't see that coming. I thought Zaizen was going to have Sasaki take Michael's place. I can't decide if I'm relieved or not. Oooh, I just want to kick that raping bastard right in the nuts >_< grrr!! Please continue. I won't be able to rest until that prick gets what's coming to him.
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Reviewed By: MsCongeniality [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very enjoyable read. Please keep at it...I want to know what happens next. :)
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Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 21:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah!! an update!! Sasaki's awake? Oh goodie!! Uh-oh, Michael's a target of that nasty witch now. Hope the others can keep him safe. Nice cameo by one of my favorite florists. Personally I think you've done a good job with keeping people in character. Amon may not show his feelings, doesn't mean he doesn't have any. But a leader (especially in such a dangerous profession)can't always allow himself the luxury of such things. At least, that's my take on him. Anyhoo, keep up the good work. I wanna know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 18:39 CDT
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Oi! Keep writing!! I need to know what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: el techo On: April 05, 2004 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Pay attention to Algebera III, get your thought going in the evil parallels of English Lit. How evil is that class? ;D I would love to read what happens next!
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Reviewed By: BendyStrawLuver On: April 04, 2004 19:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was really good fic! It was really deatiled and suspenseful! Please make it into a series! I wanna know what happens to Sakaki!!!
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Reviewed By: just4ubaby On: March 30, 2004 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To tell you the truth, I thought I wasn't going to like this story, that's why I read it last. But, OMG, it was excellent! I couldn't break away from it at all! I do hope you make it a series, because I want to read some more! Excellent job!
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Title: How can you live with yourself??
Reviewed By: The 7th Toprahim [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
...leaving it there like that? *pout* Poor poor Sakaki; I lub him so much. *erases the 'end?' and writes sloppily 'to be continued...'* There! :D Now you should at leat try to make a next part, right?
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