Title: Cute ^_^ Reviewed By: Buka 2K On: March 16, 2004 16:56 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a good chapter so far, and I love the first person perspective. It's really cool actually, something I need to work on. But I give this fic a thumbs up.
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