| "Reign of Spiders" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 17:53 CDT
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Im not going to give up that easily...You have to right more on this story and Im going to keep writing you untill you come to your sences and write more I Don't want to wait a year to get another chapter for all I know I'll get hit by a car a die by that time....so you better start writeing or I'll haunt you Muhahahahahaah...JK but serously I'm poking you so write..*evil glar*.....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 18:34 CDT
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Just poking to make sure you keep working Muhahahahaha....Hehe...You shall update....Or maybe we should get a demon for you so he/she could force you to write Muhahahahaha...If only If only...Well you'll just have to live with my Poking or write more....XD...Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 18:30 CDT
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Most exellent See you can write a chapter In under a year if you realy put your mind to it *glint*......NOw all you got to do it keep going you are very talented and this story is realy good...you have to up date soon I just can't wait for the darring escape, Will Inuyasha save Kagome from getting rapped??......ooooooooo I have to read more and I'm deffenetly going to poke at it...hehe.....Now I know that it would be stuped but a though came to mind when Kagome said she wished she could "sit" him well what if some how she got those rosiry beats around his neck....can you see it "heal girl....baka Inuyasha sit boy" hehehe....well I can see that funny stuff though it would probably get rediculous....YOU have to keep going I'll write a comment every week if I have to *smiling almost scary*....Feel the rath of my pokey comments...Muhahahahaahahahaah...Ok update soon.....NYUKA...P.S. or you will have nightmarres of the never endding reviews...Muhahahaahaha...JK..But seriously you got to right more don't let your talent for write go to waist...WoW thats a long P.S. hehe.
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Title: one more thing
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 15:51 CDT
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O ya update soon......and if you cant think of eny thing ask you reader for suggestions XP
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story its like soooooooooo koooooooo and when I first started reading I was thinking that it was going to be slightly different form the real story and I was like I don't know about this but I kept reading and it blew my mind I'm like on the ground and my brain Is on the floor...I think this has the potental to be a very great fic Its all koo and junk ya know but when I was reading I noticed the the time jumps I mean its like crazy what you started like three years ago and you only of the fifth chapter...*laugh to self*....But it doesn't mean I don't like this story...I realy want to read more on it.....I think it kinda funny to see Kagome getting a piece of her own medicen....lol....I noticed did you like up date yesturday that is so koo I feel all lucky and junk.....you have to keep writing on this fic because I'm a very impationent person when it come to reading more on a fan fic....also you kept on saying in your author notes that you wouldn't take that long and if I'm not misstaken their is nearly a year between each chapter...lol....ok now that I'm reading you have to update like at least every week because my brain (that is still laying the ground by the way) will explode and not another inteleget though will come in my mind.....lol....JK....but seriously I might have to like bugg you go finish this fic because I like I way to much.....I mean look at all the people who are wrighting all those comments from the past they seemed to be upset that you weren't updateing and stuff expeshialy that Cindyve13 that person was with you for a will and you just let them stop reading come one....XD.....This story is to good to let die so if I have to I'll post some kind of message from time to time...XP so beware...Muhahahahaahahahahahah!
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Reviewed By: snowecat32 On: June 21, 2007 22:23 CDT
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Get a beta, you need it. The formatting of the last chapter is a horrendous smashed together jumble of lines. You should fix it. This has potential, but it needs work.
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Reviewed By: Jezi futhark [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 13:20 CDT
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ohh kay. wow poor kagome but i guess her sit is just as bad. Miroku... ughg and is the girl Sango? update!
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Title: I told you so!!!
Reviewed By: DragonHostile17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 14:44 CDT
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Karen you caged fruit bat! I told you 50 zillion times, people are going to start hating you if you dont update! You cant classify ADD as writer's block! To all those who read her fics, I apologize and will personally kick her ass into gear. Hear that karen? I know your busy with the move and all but come on! i saw all those pages on your computer the other day. forget editing, and just post what you have, hell send them to me and I'LL edit them. leave aka alone and write!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 20:18 CDT
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are you ever going to update this fic?
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugi (not signed in) On: October 24, 2004 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story and cant wait for more. ^_^ great work!!! keep it up
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 11:45 CDT
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hey i'm really happy that you've decided to start up this story again :D. I actually completely forgot about it. I really like the story line and can't wait to see how the story progresses. So far it's gotten my attention again and hope the future chapters are as interesting as the ones that u have put up. Good luck
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 14:46 CDT
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Are you going to ever update??
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 09:00 CST
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Wha happened??? Did you forget your own story??? If you don't udate people will stop reading and I really like the story line here. update soon please :(
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 00:17 CST
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I love it. I hope the rest of the story is as interesting as the beggining
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Title: yayyyyyyyyyy
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayyyyyyyyyy i love the story and u r a great author ^_^ please keep updateing
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