| "Learning to live again" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: lil sesshomarus girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 15:44 CDT
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please finish this is good.
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Reviewed By: darkness 07 On: October 07, 2004 23:46 CDT
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Ho hum. *yawns* I think I'm beginning to hate love scenes. I mean, how many oooooh's and ahhhh's can a person take not to mention the heavily breathed "I want you." That's been said and done thousands of times in GW fanfiction. Try to have your characters develop something between them other than their raging libidos, make your story something than all the other run-of-the-mill one out there that focus mainly on sex. They're boring and a dime a dozen.
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Reviewed By: lil sesshomarus girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god keep them to together after the mission... and can't wait to finish reading it.....it's awsome (^_~)))
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Reviewed By: Princess2000204 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 00:14 CST
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I like this fic!!! It should be 1x2 all the way along with a little 3x4 in the background, update really soon please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sailor Pookie On: March 24, 2004 01:53 CST
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Even though I am a die-hard 1x2 fan, I think Duo deserves to lose Heero after being such a jerk!! This would make a great 5X1 fic...Wufei seems like he would be really romantic and caring to Heero in this story. I really want to see where this fic goes so pleeeeeaaaassse update soon!
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Reviewed By: heero_da_man [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story, its so dramatic and angsty, can't wait to see what happens, i hope wufei and heero end up together, because after what duo did he don't deserve him back
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Reviewed By: HeeroDuoForever On: March 22, 2004 16:15 CST
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GET DUO TO CLEAN HIS ACT. HEERO AND DUO HAVE ALWAYS BEEN THE NUMBER ONE CHARACTER CHOICE. IT WILL GET MUCH MORE IF IT IS WITH A GOOD TWIST TO IT. PUT HEERO AND FIE TOGETHER FOR SOMETIME, BUT MAKE SURE IT ENDS IN DUO AND HEERO TOGETHER FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! @_@
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Reviewed By: leemaxyui On: March 22, 2004 16:12 CST
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I like it a lot but I think that you should get Duo to wake up and see his mistake. Heero and Duo get back together. It would be so interesing to have Heero and Fie date or something. Duo has been having headaches and goes from horny to depressed and decides to leave town. He is angry at him self for hurting Heero but he can not understand why he is acting the way he is. Have Duo go into a coma since he has a turmar in his brain and it is sitting on a certain part of his brain causing his emotions to go crazy. He is out of town and since he was with a hoker when it happened they took his wallet after they called an ambulance. Have Heero not know about it and Fie and him are dating for some time. Duo is in a coma for about six months before he comes out of the coma and thinks it is the day after the war. The doctor goes over his information and contacts the guys and Sally. They explain that it was a tumor. Duo still thinks that Heero and him are ok and it gets real messed up. Sally tells them it was not Duo but the tumor that created all the problems. So you can get a Heero and Duo back together PPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ailime On: March 20, 2004 00:47 CST
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I'm a bit split up at the moment.. I realy think Duo is a giant jerk to treat Heero that way and all but still! Annyway... If you do decide on another paring then make it an 5x1 fick because i LOVE uke Heero and frankly Duo is an idiot that deserves to have his hapiness slip through his fingers. Heero needs to be loved!!!!
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: March 19, 2004 07:55 CST
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DuoXHeero DuoXHeero DuoXHeero. I feel that it should be Duo and Heero for several reasons. 1. Duo is scared becasues everyone he ever loved has died and he is just a little confused. He is not being mean out of his heart he really feals that he is doing what is right thing for Heero. I mean he does call himself the God of Death after all. 2. Duo has called Heero when he was gone just not right timing. He still loves him and it shows in all his worrying. 3. Duo has had so many people leave him through death and I feal that the if you make Heero and Duo not together when they have a child would push Duo to the crazy barn. Losing all of the people he loved then losing the man he loves and his child that would just kill him. 4. Duo loves childern he wants a family you can tell by his love for Father Maxwell and Sister Helen. Just give the boy a chance Heero PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEE EEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: March 17, 2004 03:30 CST
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Well I am one of those that read this story at AFF. I frankly want Heero to move on. I love the 1x2x1 pairing. However this story just screams 5x1 to me. Duo does not love Heero (seen from his actions). I believe that Wufei would cherish Heero and not cheat on or lie to Heero (unlike Duo). Well you are the author and it's up to you as to how you wish to expend this story. Just my two cents worth. *keeping fingers crossed * =P
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