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| "Quack Experimental Fusion Kaolla Saga" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: HAHAHAAHAHAHAHA
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooooo dam funnny*laughs*. Any way keep up the good and funny work...*bursts out laughing*
| Reviewed By: Dark Serenade On: May 25, 2004 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. I laughed through the entire thing. Please continue, I can't wait to see what you do with the rest of the cast from both.
| Title: Your first review.
Reviewed By: Akuma64 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic, since it combines my 2 favorite anime into 1 fic. Wrting style: Your writing style is good, the script format is perfect for comedy. Although it feels like the selection thinggy in the Love Puny chapter could get a little annoying since you seem to repeat yourself with. End -->Continue [Keitaro pressed continue.] Other than that, the style is good. Spelling\Grammar: Perfect. Although I don't have much experience with correcting grammar and stuff, it's good. Originality\Creativity: 7 although it would have been lower since this is a fusion with a script ripped off 1 anime and the characters from a 2nd anime put in, there's still a very good amouunt of creativity that was put into this peice so it got a hire score. Around a C+. Enjoyment: Although it does tend to get annoying in the style sometimes and we can easily predict what will happen next (for those of us whose seen Excel Saga the anime), this is still a good fic to think back on and the characters go great together. Overall: I love this fic and I hope that you make more of this in the future.
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