| "A Battle Lost" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Part 1
Reviewed By: blessed_love15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Being alone with her was exhilarating and difficult at the same time" This describes how Kyo feels about Tohru perfectly. Good job!
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Title: The Battle Lost
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate to put those kind of ratings on a story! The story was very good and I loved reading all of it...and I hate to say this...BUT...I did expect more out of a story of this rating. It wasn't nearly as juicy as some R stories are so I don't know who's wrong or what. I personally loved your story. I thought it was the most realistic story out of all of the other Kyo/Tohru fics at this rating. I was completely impressed. All I ask is that you can go over the top at this rating just not too over the top...lol. That sounded wrong. ^-^ Hope to read more of your work. Tchao!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Neonlite17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 01:02 CST
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I adored your story. I even found myself re-reading it a few times after having read a particularly angsty story, to balance it out with a bit of happiness. I wouldn't mind reading your 'non-edited' Kyoru 'moments' (that you didn't change for Media Miner ^^) I agree with whoever said to link. And they seem right about since the rating was NC-17, you could've included it either way, but it's cool to be cautious. I would love to see more Fruits Basket fanfiction from you
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 19:28 CST
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omg this is such a great story! I was practically crying it was so sweet! You have a very sophisticated writing style and it really makes it a lot more fun to read. Thank you! =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha is mine On: September 08, 2004 14:09 CDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KYO IS SO FRIGGIN HOT!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FRUITS BASKET STORIES I'V EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Mokodane On: May 31, 2004 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story and I felt it was very sweet. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Halo-chan On: March 25, 2004 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't want you to think that my rating speaks poorly of your story, because I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! I'm a sucker for light-hearted romances, and my heart completely melted when I read your story's last paragraph . I also really liked how you seemed to give a realistic touch to both Tohru and Kyo. They were both shy, nervous, and thoughtful about their situation. Plus, I liked the angst. ^_^* It made the good parts more desirable for me. I do remember, however, reading a few typos and a few sentences that confused me, but overall, I think your story was fairly well written. My only request is that you post your non-edited version of the lemon here on this site. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I thought that if a fic was rated NC-17, that such graphic depictions were considered acceptable. Anyway, if nothing else, perhaps you could put a link to the unedited version at the end or the beginning of the last chapter because I would really like to come and read it some time. I love Kyo! ~^_^~
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Reviewed By: King_Hao On: March 18, 2004 18:19 CST
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this is pretty good. i like the story line but the lemon was kind of simple. but good job, it's a nice fic to read
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 06:59 CST
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I really like this Fruits Basket fic. Pretty good so far!
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