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| "Ranma Vs. Krueger" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: akane/ranma pairing
Reviewed By: an author On: April 11, 2004 02:23 CDT
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my real problem with akane/ranma pairings is yes one they move way too fast for one. for another akane always abuses ranma. i have read through most of the translated manga. although i didn't get to the end due to the fact that i cannot find an online source to read the final ones. yet i have seen the ending clips of the manga due to a friend and i know that ranma does declare his love for akane. but consider this that ranma never says he is IN LOVE with akane. from what i saw he says 'i love you akane' which could be mistaken for brotherly love, friendship love or yes romantic love. no offense to akaneites out there. but i must explain that all fanfic authors who write fanfiction turn akane into an INSTANT saint and remove all the abusiveness rumiko-san did put up around the pair. then there are the other fiances and other characters to consider. check out my fanfiction called "ranko's mad as hell" there i do show that ranma does love akane and akane is developing feelings for ranma, however with all the other fiances it won't end up in them getting matched up. also here is a few other things that are against akane. one she forces ranma to eat her cooking which should be taste tested first of all by herself. she considers herself a martial artist but refuses to train seriously and always claims 'i wasn't ready' and such. she is a spoiled brat for another thing. the only thing she has going for her in their pair up is that she offered to be ranma's friend before she started with the abuse after finding out he was a guy. that and ranma doesn't know any better due to genma's influence. so yes all authors totally remove the akane hitting and abusing ranma with insults and physical attacks. yes ranma is a bit at fault for insulting akane but SHE started it in the series. ranma tried to be nice but akane would have none of it. this is why i am against akane and ranma getting together. i understand your reasoning but please understand mine. sincerely, nameless author ps. i used an author cause the nick name 'nameless author' i signed up with but i don't have time to log in and wait for my slow connection to get me into the media miner logged in section. anyhow i hope this explains why i am against ranma and akane matchups.
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Reviewed By: Kawii-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 13:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww....Why couldn't you kill Akane off too. But it still was good.
| Reviewed By: Author On: March 25, 2004 11:05 CST
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Yes, I know about the tense changes, and in a week or so I'm going to go back and change all the typos (NOT gramatical errors) and "accidental" changes of tense (I'm seriously considering just ADOPTING the script-style instead of trying to write fan fics in either form because sometimes I'll forget which kind of fan fic I'm writing and use the wrong tense). Also, don't diss the Ranma/Akane pairing. If you've read through the ENTIRE fan-translated Manga series, Ranma declares his love for Akane when he thinks she's dead, then it turns out she's not dead and then they almost get married before all the other characters screw it up. It's obvious to me that Rumiko intended this to be THE pairing of the series, which is why I support it and write fan fics featuring that pairing. I know that some "undereducated" writers and readers seem to think that the pairing is absolutely absurd (considering that they DO appear to hate eachother through most of the series), and I can understand that viewpoint. However, if you look beneath the surface and annalyze the few scenes where they break through the "hating eachother", you'll see that they actually secretly kind of like eachother. However, if you're only problem with the pairing is how I dealt with it (i.e. the character developement was too fast/too slow), then please say so and state your specific concerns. Thank you.
| Reviewed By: nameless author On: March 24, 2004 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
well because you switched back and forth between present and past tense prose of writing. also cause you had some spelling errors and gramatical errors. beyond that it was very very enjoyable with the exception of ranma/akane matchup. but thanks for the hilarious read.
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