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Reviewed By: babygirladdy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story... but honestly I could only make it until around chapter 12ish. The story itself is good, the concept is good... I have some issues with the spelling and grammar, however, and this is something that can be easily fixed via spell check and/or beta. I also found it a bit hard to really keep up with it, which is why I couldn't make it past chapter 12... it kinda bounces around too much, doesn't distinguish itself between "scenes", switches tenses from Sesshoumaru's point of view to Kagome's with no real warning, and a lot of the paragraphs just seemed rushed... like the story didn't really take me into this world and make me feel as though I was there experiencing it while reading. It felt more like a montage of small moments giving bits of the real story along the way and to me felt like it needed to be developed a little more. Overall, however, I gave it an overall rating of 7, because despite not finishing it and having trouble reading it well, it IS a good story, just needs some serious editing and needs to be fleshed out a little more.
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Title: Addiction
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Addiction
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 13:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: ADDICTION
Reviewed By: Fluffgal! On: March 14, 2005 08:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH! I FOUND THIS FIC ON ANOTHER SITE! I WAS SO INTO IT BUT THEN I LOST IT AND COMPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT IT! AND NOW I FOUND IT AGAIN!I RULE!!^_^
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Reviewed By: kona On: December 12, 2004 19:16 CST
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Sooooooooooooooooooo boring and not like shessy at all I hate you!!!
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Title: Addiction
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 18, 2004 19:07 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Addiction
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 01, 2004 20:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK On: July 28, 2004 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD THAT IS SUCH A CUTE ENDING,is thatthe ending well if it is it so cute if not you better update soon this is such a cute story and so sad atsome parts but cute none the less.
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 20:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay!!! good story! but is that then end? or is there more chappies? ._.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 14:37 CDT
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ohmigod that was so cute!! I think i'm going to die that was so cute. "because you wanted me to" aww!!! I think i'm going to explode from a cuteness overload. I'm so glad they got back togther and ahh!! That was so cute!! I'm sad this story it ending, but happy that i'm reading other stories of yours. take care!
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Title: YEAH!!!!
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, when I read chapter 18 I was so worried that the story would end sadly, but I'm so happy it ended well. YEAH!! It makes me so giddy to have good loving endings like this. Please write more wonderful stories soon!! :3 Nya!!
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Title: Oh My God!!!
Reviewed By: Star Keeper (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! *tear* that was the most beautiful fic that I've ever read... *sniffles* oh, so romantic... *bawls eyes out* *sniff* oh, sorry, I just love this story.... I'll remember it forever.... and you are becoming one of my favorite authors. It takes true talent to write a story that touching, moving, tear-jerking, etc. I am looking forward to reading yor other works. hopefully you write lots of Sesshy/Kagome fics, cuz they're my fav!! I'll love you forever now, cuz you write about Sesshy!! ^.^ *drools* sexy puppy... ^.~ *wink-wink* well, luv ya, bye-bye!!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 18:11 CDT
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aww its almost over...will it be a happy ending? dun dun dun! lol two weeks doesnt seem that long but when you;re separtated from someone you love its like eternity i hope you can update soon, even though i dont want the story to end.
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: June 29, 2004 23:02 CDT
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oh my god, i cant wait for the next chapter! its so sad! they cant break up! or can they? ahhh i cant wait hope to read soon!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK On: June 29, 2004 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg so sad. Update realy soon. this story is good. but i was kinda mad that was the ast chap. update soon
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