| "I'm sorry" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: amethyst_rose1993 On: December 09, 2004 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erm.... it wasn't that great... And don't get mad! I'm just telling the truth! The agian my favorite type of fic is Bakura-beats-Ryou. I don't like the mushyness. They should not get married and adopt kids! Of course thats my opinion. You should read Spider Webbs fics and "Bonded", thats a good one. My favorite is "Weepin Angel",so yeah.... Bye!
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Reviewed By: WeepingDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 02:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, i just realized i've already read/reviewed this one! i like it better the second time! (yes....that was meant to be a compliment...)
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Reviewed By: KaoriLindsayBlack [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 19:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
thank you 4 the four reviews i have gotten.
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Reviewed By: WeepingDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 21:45 CST
Comment/Review:
hmmm...interesting. i think i like, but i\'ll have to readit over again later. my mom is due home any sec and she\'ll kill me if she finds me on an anime site^_-. i like yur ideas!!!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 06:57 CST
Comment/Review:
me likey!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Chapter 2 was a whole lot better, great job. In some places I was a little confused, but I think it's just cuz of the punctuation. Keep on writing, k? u'll get better as time progresses.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 09:53 CST
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wow, I like chapter two. please continue. please.
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